IN THE DAY OF DEATH - Musing

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

IN THE DAY OF DEATH

You came face-to-face
Accompany the last day
Cloudy black
Engraved

Family, Treasure; I predict
They must be gone
Live charity
Alone

When the spirit is about to escape
Even the soul is free
The body is numb
Limp

Do not want your tears
Unified drizzle slicing
Sobbing complained
Poor

Run with a sincere heart
Until the time runs
We forget
Memories

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Yes death comes for everyone but are we ready for the afterlife? Great poem

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