The Gods Who Strike With Golden Iron Rod

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Thou art holy with madness!
Your word is as rough as sandstone,
your cleanup befell upon us swiping our reasons,
end up a cadaver. scrap like an abandon paper!

Thou art holy full of loath!
Your beating swipe the naked bodies,
the stench is a sweet savor you endure,
a power of absolute fury, you sneer.

Thou art benevolent uncharacteristically!
Summoned the wise men unto their death,
pronounce a sham worship at your feet,
a mere soul as a beast stray miserably!

A pitiable mortal stoned of complexity eroded vehemently,
shrouded a cloak of steadfast absurdity, roughly you care,
a lifeless contention adduces a zest of senseless state,
prudently captured the hearts of dull deities,  
a shrewd cogitation mangled flawlessly,
mingled corruptions by the gods, feeble providence?

Tender dispute among the condemned soul, a golden iron rod smote the heathens,
they have smitten the bone of my people, the charmed accolade of false demigod,
an apostle of apostate bribe with 30 silver, brandishing the defectors mark,
a whistling sounds hit the Word scraping the fleshly wounded frailty frame, I bowed degraded!
Imputing the blood unto my vein, its course the life to epiphaneia, in perpetuity!


October 9, 2017
Sampaloc, Manila


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I enjoyed the language of this and all of the fantastic imagery. I am sorry I didn't get to it before the payout deadline passed. Good work though.

Thanks for the comment moeknows! I'll try to compose a poem in a few days...

A moving poem calling out the feeble false dieties and the promises that fail our mortal souls. A glorious testament to the Savior whose blood can cleanse and revive us. I love

a whistling sounds hit the Word scraping the fleshly wounded frailty frame, I bowed degraded!
Imputing the blood unto my vein, its course the life to epiphaneia, in perpetuity!

I know you'll be able to decipher this simple poem. And yes, cleanse and reviving us from our infirmities only by the blood of the Savior!

Thanks wandrose7!

It was my pleasure.

Nosebleed boss

Ay lol salamat mam wanderinggian21!

Nice poem sir. Had to look at the dictionary to understand it though lol

With the way you write... Nah... I know you can compose a poem like this... say 2 days or 1 day maybe... or 5 hours? Lol!

Wow! Sir John, this is magical!

You can compose more than what I wrote, iyanpol12!

ang lalim na naman po sir..di maarok ng utak ko hehe

Makakagawa ka rin nito mama willow1114!

Pwede pakitranslate sir john sa tagalog? haha ganda ng pagkakasulat

Mam matutunaw na ako sa kakaisip kapag iniliwat ko ito sa Filipino. ehehehee

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Immortality. Endless possibilities. Only THE GODS. Nosebleeding poem, kuya. Maganda. Maganda!!!

The Gods who needs the God... Ayun o! Thanks, Jerryl!

Wala na talaga akong masabi kundi, super galing talaga.

Salamat ng marami mam rakitera sa simpleng ito nagustuhan mo!

they have smitten the bone of my people, the charmed accolade of false demigod,

This one is so deep...

ok OMG that is what you call simple and ordinary?????

Promise mam magaan na pagkakasulat ko niyan...

nagka scarcity ako sa vicab sir ang galing!

Ay mam makakagawa ka rin niyan promise.

Awesome. I wish i could write as beautiful poem as this sir.

Yes you can, start with four stanzas...

This poem is really great sir @iwrite i really want the way you express your thoughts...hope to create something like this soon

Thanks baby07!

angas naman sir john, sobrang lalim haha hirap hukayin :)

Ay sir wag u hukayin baka makakita ka ng maraming kalansay! Thanks julstamban!

whoa! very deep and meaningful poem. You ever think of compiling your works and selling them? :)

Yes, I'm planning to make an ebook or the printed one. Thanks coolector!

wow a lot of words I didn't know, have to check my dictionary, haha. Nice one!

Aw! Nosebleed ako sir John. Sobrang deep! Wish I could create a poem like that. ☺️

Wow, so beautiful sir. Though I have to look for some of the words for their meaning :-)

Nakakanose bleed sir ang inyong tula hehe but I enjoyed reading kahit di ko po maintindihan lahat ng words 😂

Malalim kailangan ng dictionary..

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what a nice poem I just trust god no matter what happens.

Nice I love these kinds of things

Thanks maverickinvictus!