"Deserving" (followed by the explanation)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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There comes a watershed moment; it may be an
Event or comment or message, that suddenly
Puts the person or job or relationship in a
Whole new clarity of vision, suddenly
☼You know it is time to move on. It
Is usually not your fault, but you
Have to be the one to call a
Halt. You must do so for
Your own good, you
Don’t deserve
Toxic people.

“Deserving”
by
Jerry E Smith
©5/10/17

Family members can and often do have a very deep
Hold on you, financially, emotionally and physically.
Without them really knowing or realizing just how
Deeply they can and do effect you in a negative
Way, they just keep on keeping on doing what
They do, and when YOU become aware that
Nothing is going to change, it is up to YOU
To get the HELL out of Dodge, as they say.



These .gifs were created for me by @coquiunlimited; many thanks




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superb framing! texture is spot on :D well thought out text, fits with your picture
& ~Love IS a superpower~🐉🐲💗

Thank you @swedishdragon, nice to 'see' you again.
Most often I don't 'think out' my text, I write what I'm feeling and then
Go back and try to make things rhyme, or fit the inverted triangle
Format I've used for so long (On FB you can't do that, so it
Ended up being an inverted/descending right triangle)
Using such a restrictive shape is...restricting. That's
One reason I love Steemit so, because of all the
Formatting options you have available.

very nice poem written by you... the girl is looking throughtfull about something... them theam of the photo is so complex...

Thank you @kumilla, I appreciate all your comments, though I don't always
Comment back.