Why is it so empty...so hollow...no sound?
Where once there was the excited beat...just as a drum,
now is no feeling, like frozen fingers...numb.
The rainbows, the love, the light that was once around,
all are failing as he heads to the ground.
All the loved ones he helped in the past, never noticed and leave him to fast.
He is dying inside and all he needs is a taste.
But they all shuffle by, in too big of a haste.
Is there not one, just one, with a little to spare?
Just enough to help him dig his way out of there?
No one seems to hear his beckoning calls,
so he curls up alone, inside his walls.
Just him and his heart in there...no one around
Why is it so empty...so hollow...no sound?
I hope you enjoyed my original poetry...even if it was only enjoyed for a good laugh... But seriously, take a minute or two just to show someone you love them. Preferably someone who would never expect it(or possibly feel they deserve it)like a complete stranger. Its amazing the difference just a smile can make in someones day, and their life. I love you all and will see yous next time.🤗🤗🤗
There was a great Australian racehorse in the 1920s & 30s named Phar Lap who was reputed to have a heart that was abnormally large (which is actually on display at the Australian National Museum in Canberra). You Sir, make his heart look like the size of a grape seed.
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That means the world to me. I have been on a atruggle the last couple days and this morning...well it was tough. Then i log into Steemit and see your loving compliment...thank you mate.
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I like poems and I like this one too. A strong message to the living not walking dead man on earth... to care about other no matter who they are..
Be kind towards other must be in my blood, inherited from my ancient who always appreciate the guests and strangers who came to our land till they occupied our country for hundreds year after that😊
Sometimes I wonder, who could filled the empty heart to human? When they don't know what's the purposes of being a human?
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I am glad you liked it. Im not very good at them. So im glad at least a couple people enjoyed it. Bu(i guess) i must have done alright because some Steemit account that tracks statistics said it was the number 26th best poem on Steemit yesterday.😀 and thanks for stopping by Evans post. Im going to have him reply to everyone tonight after school.
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I just noticed it my friend, so you have a talent in writing a poem, the message is clear. The love is undeniably true, even though you're being left behind you continue on loving. It suits you brother
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I was going to type a whole big response to you, but then i thought....im going to make a post. Youll see in a minute.(this is why i never get anything done....start couple things, then start a hundred others.)😁😁😁
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