Rain is persistent,
Insistent
It smokes
In chimneys
And darkens the bricks
Shines on slate roofs
And beads
The leaded glass.
It pervades everything
with mystery
and gloom
Draws me to the window
In a darkened room,
Searching for you
But where?
In the past
Or present
Or the swirling haze
Of mist
And drizzly days?
Now without boundaries
Or any clear lines
to separate your dreams from mine
We could even meet
In another time,
Indifferent
To days and seasons...
With only a downpour
To provide a reason.
Nice one, I love the rain, nice way to describe it too. @johnjgeddes
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thanks, @krazypoet
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Anytime
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beautiful! i love the rain..
Rain washes away all the painful stains..
replenishing again our brightest day
with the saturated power of each drop
makes you feel like climbing a mountain top
once the pain is released, again you can feel the peace
take a deep breath and let it go.. it will rain again before you know.
~ <3 ~
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very nice, Nikki :)
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Thank you! ☺️❤️
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Your end rhyme in each stanza is amazing. The first stanza is thrilling i had to read it aloud to get the rhythm.
This is beautiful sir.
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Loved it
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thanks
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This post has received a 23.07 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.
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Beautiful. As I have just started blogging, I am still trying to learn ways of blogging poetry by watching ace-bloggers like you. I will be grateful if you take some time out visiting my blog and give suggestions to improve.
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Beautiful. I could never write such a beautiful poem but I have always appreciated the rhythm of it. Thanks.
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I reached out with a well thought out letter and got shutdown. I did not view it as link spamming, simply providing an opportunity for you to recognize an up and coming author. Perhaps establish a conversation; or open the doorway for communication. No worries take care..
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