Nice! I like it :D Not sure how this poetry challenge works, but my first steemit post is a poem about the spirit waking up while the body is not. Your morning song reminded me of it!
I woke up this morning but I didn't wake up
Just lying paralyzed on my back in the bed
Like clinically dead but alive in my head
https://steemit.com/escape/@jonasontheroof/sleep-paralysis-ego-trap-what
This is great, thanks for sharing!
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit