We were coastin' on the coast when you opened my eyes
Made me notice where the ocean was holding the sky, right
I was blinded, your smile shining behind those green eyes
The horizon so enticing please say you'll be mine
Don't wake me up 'cause I'm in love with all that you are
You make me see the truth in things, I think that you are
The remedy for everything it seems that you are
The truth itself because nothing else can take me so far
My afternoon dream when
The world is speedin'
I am still sleepin'
In my blue dream and
I know the meaning
For all the seasons
You are the reason
My love
My mind is open
So wide since you came inside
I feel so alive
Without you life just passes by
Passes by, passes by
Don't wake me up 'cause I'm in love with all that you are
You make me see the truth in things, I think that you are
The remedy for everything it seems that you are
The truth itself because nothing else can take me so far
My afternoon dream when
The world is sleeping
I am still thinking
Of my blue dream
It's, bliss
My afternoon dream when
The world is sleeping
I am still thinking
Of my blue dream
It's, bliss
Wow gracious dear @joseph you used very beautiful effective words no doubt. It is really a very nice piece of poetry, I personally very enjoyed to read it. Thanks for sharing
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Jhene Aiko used to be one of my favourite musical artistes. The cool flow of her songs, wonderful choice of her lyrics, Dido-like calmness of her voice and uniqueness of the instrumentation was just awesome.
I really love her albums:
However, I just don't understand the garbage she's been singing recently, especially her collaboration with Big Sean.
I hope she gets back to the way she started.
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wonderful poem heart touching
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We were coastin' on the coast when you opened my eyes
Made me notice where the ocean was holding the sky, right
I was blinded, your smile shining behind those green eyes
The horizon so enticing please say you'll be mine
Wow the personification in line one of this first verse is awesome.
In the remaining line you used metaphors to express emotions here.
Overall i like your refrain in each verse.
Beautiful poetry❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Those are jhene aiko's lyrics... from the song 😉
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Good artikel
👍👍👍
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Thanks For your Good Info.
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very nice poetry and music
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The poem is so great that it shows that it is dedicated to someone whom you love from your heart thank you
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Wow what a poetry....
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I am always dream but i dream when i woke not when i fell asleep
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I always find it difficult to understand poems but I love to read thm. Thanks😊
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Lovely poem, hope it's dedicated to someone special
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Beautiful artwork and cozy music!
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wow! how sweet!
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Good post
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Amazing post and wonderful video thanks for sharing
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Kerenn
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Congratulations @joseph, this post is the forth most rewarded post (based on pending payouts) in the last 12 hours written by a Hero account holder (accounts that hold between 10 and 100 Mega Vests). The total number of posts by Hero account holders during this period was 260 and the total pending payments to posts in this category was $3165.57. To see the full list of highest paid posts across all accounts categories, click here.
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I enjoyed reading your post.
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sexy song!
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This is beaitiful..hope to see you give us more always
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Wow i am amazed...
I know this song by Jhene Aiko
I played this alot
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Great poetry....
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Congratulations @joseph!
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Amazing Lyrics. If you care truly care about the Artist and want to Benefit as a Music Fan check out [Vezt] and my post on this new revolution: (https://steemit.com/music/@cryptosignz/vezt-revolutionizing-the-life-of-an-artist)
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I simply love your articles, what great content and quality of posting you offer the community here on Steemit and abroad.
Thanks a lot :)
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😍A very informative post. Great job. Keep it up! 😍
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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.
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Beautiful words and beautiful music bewell @joseph
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my favorit song ever <3
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