your central being is infinite bliss
what is of bliss is bliss
you are happiness itself
you are unhappy because your eyes have grown blind.
Who You Are II
7 years ago by lifegoalmentor (59)
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One could perversely say that eyes have grown blind because of their own inherent maturity. Interesting poem, both for depth and brevity. Upvote given.
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Nice addition! Thanks
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Welcome. Bliss is interesting word, very sound. Coming from Slavic background, i am immediately reminded of Polish word blisko , though its meaning entirely different from English bliss. This is another highlight of your poem for me.
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