RE: "SteemitPoetryContest10": Inevitable Growth

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"SteemitPoetryContest10": Inevitable Growth

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I'm in love with the final Quadtrain however the first two I'm having difficulty understanding - the sentences are dis-conjunct to me

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      ·  7 years ago (edited)

    My apologies :'( I just noticed the typo's in the latter. Kindly re-read again, maybe this time it will be a bit better. Thank you for reading and sharing your time in this simple poetry of mine :).

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        ·  7 years ago 

      haha you even made a rhyme at the end. Yeah, too easy. Us poets gotta stick together :P

      'the dessert of immaturity of a man' I still don't quite understand.. Is the second quadtrain one whole sentence? Or is the fourth line a new sentence?

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          ·  7 years ago 

        It's desert hehehe sorry again!! I honestly make a lot of typo's on my essays at school grrrrr.. I would absolutely check and recheck it next time..

        And I even submitted it in a contest hahaha yet I have a lot of errors on spelling.. I guess I need to sleep now. It's al;ready 1:00 am in my country. Haven't slept properly for days. University life.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Yeah get some sleep, try again tmrw :D
          Following you for more.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Thanks for your time sir and good uh mornight (morning and night) hehehe

            May you have a pleasant day or calm evening :).

            just wanna send m bye-bye's

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