i was drowning in a lake and was resistant to the fake,
the illusory love which was bound to fall apart,
and now i can't feel this dart piercing through my heart,
for once again time stood still, and then i saw
something magical in your eyes, something raw.
lovely poetry
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Thank you so much!
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Excellent poem!!! Wow amazing!!! I love it
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Thank you! What did you enjoy about it?
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nicely written good to know a fellow poet and writer
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Thank you! :)
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Great composition @lukakorba you are an excellent worker.
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Thank you so much! This means a lot!
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what is this pic telling
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