as my body's getting hotter,
as my thighs shake from the cold,
as my mind repeats the old,
as my greed decides to kill me,
as my fears vow not to fill me,
as my mind's chamber gets flooded,
as my ignorance concluded
i am gone
as my body's getting hotter,
as my thighs shake from the cold,
as my mind repeats the old,
as my greed decides to kill me,
as my fears vow not to fill me,
as my mind's chamber gets flooded,
as my ignorance concluded
Nice and depressing. Cheers! : )
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Thank you! It just spewed out of me as I woke up this morning.
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You're welcome, it's nice when something naturally flows out of you. : )
Although I'm mostly writing about life philosophy, social norms, and beauty, this morning I've also published an attempt of deep and depressive poetry.
Enjoy the day!
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Thank you! That’s very interesting. I often do too, but lately I’ve just been documenting my experiences in the form of poems and letting emotions be the main component of my art.
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Well, sharing personal poems is a great way to let the emotions out, I guess. : )
I'm looking forward to more discussions with you!
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Yep. I love doing that and feel like I wouldn’t be who I am if I didn’t. Thank you! Same here.
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immensely deep with a powerful flow. I love the length and how each stanza evolves the initial thought.
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This poem only really has one stanza. Thank you!
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I hope see more entrys, see ya :)
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More coming soon. :)
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