but the love we shared simply prepared
me for a heartbreak, an awful heart ache,
and if that is to return, what if i burn?
but since then i grew, and so did you.
i’m in a trance, if you gave me a chance,
a mere repeat, i’d be complete.
and you still call, making me fall
so, so deep. in my sleep
i dream about you. i can’t live without you.
go of this love, but i’m a dove.
dear, if you choose me, you’ll never lose me.
for nine months i bled, surprised i’m not dead.
damn luka, who this about?
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Wow ! Powerful poetry with greatest message. I believe it is about unreturned love from your lover. The rhythm with five equal stanzas capture the message of the poem. Nice write up and nice expression
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Take that can of Guinness and run my friend. In fact take the over sized Guinness hat too and find a bar as 'everyone is Irish tonight' and find yourself a new love, hell find several. I understand this writing comes from the heart but now it has been written and its time to move forward mate.
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