my relationship with me

in poetry •  7 years ago 

my relationship with me

i live according to me, my poetry,
and my love for you i see as some thing to
be in love with everyday. you know the day
is the friend i never had. i’m often sad,
but you make it go away; that’s when you stay
and don’t play hide and seek, making me
weak.
my heart loves to overthink, and then i sink
in the ocean of my brain. i’m in such pain,
but i know if i complain, i will lay slain
in the middle of the street. come take a seat
on the throne i grew myself. you know yourself.
i think i am just immune but tend to ruin
sober thoughts with an invasion of my own anticipation.
my relationship with me is the definition of ugly.

©LukaKorba

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With love,
Luka.

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  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

The rhythm of the poetry is well conveying the message. The stanza is well aranged too. Nice write up with good expression. If you have time you can check my work too. im also a poet and i find your work inspired

Thank you! I will have a look in my spare time. :)

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