A Love That Waits (poem)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

A love that waits

A love that waits
is a love that never been late
a lover who waits
is the one who deserves love
a love who waits
is the love that never ends.
patience is the key of success
the people who waits
is the ones who deserves to be loved,
waiting is not a waste of time
but loving the wrong person is.
Everyone waits for one reason
every one waits for a right time.

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Great poem @markjason I do agree that love really takes time.

Btw I just notice and got confused on this one

a love who waits
is the love that never lasts.

On the verses after this it shows that patience is the key for the love to last it seems like contradicting though.

edited, I'm confused also in that one,

a love that wait
is a love to last

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freewrite haha, by the way thank you for noticing.

That's the reason why! Freewriting can really give some of this stuff. Now everything is in pieces and the idea is complete. I do hope that it will be noticed by some folks and you have some good upvotes on this piece bro.

thanks you bro. :)_

Excellent poem

thank you my friend!

Creative writing. Well done!

thank you bro!

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Nice job @markjason .. Love waits, it's the person who chooses whom he/she will love either at the right time or at the wrong time, but still, He awaits. 😊😁😁

Love your poem!
Keep steeming!
Xoxo
@gerel

thank you madam! :)

Very welcome @markjason 😊

Great poem, love is the greatest of all. Upvoted @mamuda

thanks buddy!