Pain strikes through my body
Like lighting strikes a tree
Breathe in, breathe out
The world fading fast
A picture is painted, the colours are bold
One for each season of life I suppose
Staggering breathe, then cough
Like when I fall asleep
Last breath
Heart slows to a stop
Nothing is smell
Nothing is sight
No more pain
Everything is so cold
Gone...
*Poem inspired by a quote from Stratovarius (We Are Magic)
Excellent pacing @mindhunter
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Pacing & Rhythm: 7/10 / Imagery: 4/10 / Overall: 5/10 ;)
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(never let it be said that I don't take a dose of my own critical medicine!)
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Dark photo. Dark poem.
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Surely there is hope in that title if you want there to be hope?? ;)
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.............................................................................as the soul floats off into the ether........................................................................................................................
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Your poetry really surprises me @mindhunter
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Me too! I don't know where it comes from??
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