The saga continues (cue the music!) with my latest entry into the poem-off with @uniwhisp.
I will admit, rhyme-wise this is not one of my best, but it plays the perfect inflection to @uniwhisp's latest, which you can read here: Love's Goodbye
Closure
I was there for you
But that’s not what you wanted
He ignored you
And that’s what you needed
Spellbound by trying to prove yourself
You are a slave to his trance
I showed you a woman’s worth
And you lost interest
I’m playing second fiddle, that became blatantly clear
You really don’t see it, you’re such a slave to him dear
Fool I am for thinking this had a chance
It wasn’t that your heart was surrounded
But occupied by another man’s dance
What's a poem-off, you ask? A challenge between @uniwhisp and I to see if we can go turn-for-turn and repost some of our long lost poems from the vaults of time. No rules apply, and new stuff might just make the mix!
Regards,
Mitchell J
Wowwww! What a poem, wowww. I love your writing style and the closing was awesome. Wowww;-
Amazing content! Keep steeming dearie! Cheers.
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Thanks! Yes, there will be more to come as the poem-off continues on :-)
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What a brilliantly eloquent description of this phenomenon!
"He ignored you
And that’s what you needed
Spellbound by trying to prove yourself"
A difficult topic, treated expertly. Following you and this poem off :)
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
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I like the images here: spells, fiddles, dance.... some of my favorite things! :D Off to the archives...
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blows dust off the pages
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