This is awesome! I love the internal rhyme. The language of that first line instantly drew me in. I also like the way the final lines for each stanza summed everything up. Great write. Welcome to Steemit!
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Thank you very much for the feedback! I think i enjoyed reading your comment as much as you enjoyed reading my poem :) thanks for the warm welcome!
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