RE: the Uninhabitable [Day 5]

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the Uninhabitable [Day 5]

in poetry •  7 years ago 

So sometimes I read poetry and don’t connect, other times I fairly get it but this got me. I caught myself giggling at a point with the effect you caused in this poem. You are great, don’t stop and my line out of many others i love is

Confused, I posed anew,
“Why do you brand me aegis,
yet fear my embrace?”
Mute and expressionless,
our gazes met

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thank you so much, you are far too kind <3