Confusion, An Original Poem

in poetry •  8 years ago  (edited)

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CONFUSION

Seen the world
and checked out things,
could never really figure out
what tomorrow would bring.

Checked the news
and checked the feeds,
all twisted adverts
that no one needs.

there's poison in our food, they say
and plastic in our oceans,
but the judgmental crap on TV
is all absorbed, and never mentioned.

They say love your neighbors
but there are wars all around,
and if you aren't too careful
it's your body that is found.

All I can do now is
put on my thinking hat,
for now I know that when I die,
Confusion, will be my epitaph.

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      ·  8 years ago 

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          ·  8 years ago 

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            ·  8 years ago 

          Good poem @norbu, made sense to me.

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              ·  8 years ago 

            Glad you liked it! Thanks!

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                ·  8 years ago 

              I did, good work!

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                  ·  8 years ago 

                just awesome writing :)

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                    ·  8 years ago 

                  Thank You!

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                      ·  8 years ago 

                    Excellent poem @norbu, congratulations

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                          ·  8 years ago 

                        Nicely put @norbu. I liked it :D

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                          Thank you!

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                              ·  8 years ago 

                            Great poem, @norbu,
                            It says a great deal.

                            Love & Peace & Freedom

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