RE: Elemental

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Elemental

in poetry •  6 years ago 

I need
to plead
My case
too long...

The cadence through the beginning is fun and active.

I like the rhyming throughout really.

One part threw me. Fire spreading through your bones. I thought for sure you'd say veins.

Always keep them guessing ;)

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