# LAST WORD #
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I do not know this is so bad...
When the word farewell is spoken...
But this will happen...
Stuck in my throat...
Though wrapping my lips and heart.
For the sake of the valley of the wild, the morning wind...
A hard heart and an old tree...
If there is my words hurting your heart,
or insult your pride...,
I will feel the same thing too...
You're so gorgeous, But....
I can replace black eyes, eyebrows...
And that worst charm lips ....
If you forget the holy pledge,
A form of disloyalty on the lips...
If the great decree can soften your love,
Or the sturdy walls can hold on it...
I would not expect heartache...
Wanna love last forever....
But with you....
Relying In something fake and cold ...
Not Me.....
And there's, my soul...
Linking the two of that word, loyalty and strength...
And there's, the glowing letter...
And a glowing ring.....
It has warmed and blessed me....
I hope....
These eyes will see one day...
The freedom of my soul...
And dispels all foolish thoughts...
Who mourn the memories of you...
.....Will forget you soon.....
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Nicely Poem..But Sad
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Thanks....
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I think it'd be interesting to read this with no punctuation. Reading it out loud a couple of times, I think you've been careful in building your stanzas to the point that it might benefit- the ellipses happen at natural inflection points.
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Thanks for your correction and your comment. I'll be better and give you more my bests 😊
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