When Tickled Pink
the shades are drawn
petals given soft light
hush and then it comes
heavy clouds grant a deluge
the anatomy of a flower
deep and fragrant
on the scale of nano
a wellspring for Lilliputians
creepy crawlies
and winged intermediaries
go to the well bumble bee
drink of the fermenting dew
and pollen laced absinthe
stumble and jolt
tumble and hover
take your time
have your way
with all the greedy girls
these heads hang heavy
when tickled pink
When Tickled Pink and photos are copyright Pryde Foltz
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These are amazing Pryde! Lovely words as well!
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Thanks, Paul:)
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Well done!! 2 challenges at once :)
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Thanks, Marianne. I try to keep my posting to two a day and so sometimes I have to double up:)
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I love your words always, you double-dipper! Well done!
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Thank you, Denise:) I am a momma; I gotta be a multi-tasker:)
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flowers light up like people when they are loved :)
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So beautiful and so true. Thank you, Johm:)
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Nice turn of phrase: “a wellspring for Lilliputians”
Would that be read, “wing-ed intermediaries?”
I love that picture in both B&W and full color.
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Thanks, Denise. Yes I would give winged two syllables for sure:)
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Lilliputians - that's a great word, just had to look it up and it fits perfectly! Very playful poem, and such a sensitive view of nature, what with the bees having their way and all.
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Thank you, Lazarus:)
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