I crawl into the loft like a child aimimg for her mother"s breast
Gently slide beneath your masculine figure
It was my first time but I was ready to give it up to you all night
Ready to ride to the peak of bliss with you savagely and viciously
My wild heart beats, speaking silently of God's words against a lustful carving
before the pledge of love on the altar
But your soft whisper of my name and tender kiss rip off all uncertainties
Simultanously, we subtracted the remains of the brackets between us
Our clothes taking positions in different dimensions
Our temple of mutual nakednesss interlaced
The ripple touch of your strong chest on mine erupts an indescrible heat
The taste of your lips ceaselessly doing the searching when the eyes couldnt see
quinched the thrust of passion
Your tender finger softly caressing where i have waited years for to be touched
made my overwhelmed desire worth it
The slow dancing of my nipples in your mouth quicken the pulse
My gasp for breathe expresses a million words
Screaming in raw pain and pleasure as my moaning turns to a beg of mercy
"Take me! Take me! And let the purpose of love be fulfilled"
You howls between my legs, moving deeper with every movement
Till the evidence of living was shown
and my bleeding sealed the oath of eternity.
Oooh my king,
The memories of our first and last night together
I hold dear to my heart
Until you come back to unbreak my heart
And make love to me again on a Carnifornia King's bed,my love...
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Lovely imagery. Felt the STEEM! (excuse the corny joke)
Thank you for this
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No, thank you for reading....youre welcome.
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A daring writer.
Such A wonderful painting of sex.
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hmmm i know right?? thanks
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Great improvements. Steem on dear
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thanks. Im on it...
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This is mindblowing, i am glad i read through...
great piece i must confess.
I hope to read from you soonest...
Keep steemin
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thank you for reading, i hope to always satisfy your longing. thanks
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You got me fall in love. This is awesome
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THANKS
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Beautiful poem!
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THANK YOU
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You write so well, do you visit the poetry workshop in discord?
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hmmm no i dont. are you suggesting that?
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You could help others write too.
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hmm thats true or someone can help me write better also. will check it out, thanks
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You could help while receiving help that is true. Let me know if you do!
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breath taking sensual poem... this is on point
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I KNOW RIGHT>? THANKS DEAR
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Really engaging narrative,
Keep up the good work
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I WILL TRY, THANKS FOR READING
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This is beautiful keep up the good work dear
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i wont forget to do that, thanks
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This is captivating and creative..
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thanks for reading
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