Ransom Note Poetry > "My Fingers are Soaking"

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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This is the first in an original series of poetry I am crafting, after the style of the ransom note.

Dimensions: 2322 × 2380.
8" x 10" glued newspaper cutout letters on lined paper.
Available for purchase in the Peerhub marketplace here.

"My Fingers are Soaking"

My fingers are soaking
In my slippery blood
As death I am provoking
Lying here in the mud
My mind is falling
Through no real thought
While my being is crawling
Into a hole to rot

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I really like the disturbing aesthetic and subject matter.

I like this! Really cool imagery and the words are captivating! (upvoted)

Thank you!

This poem is really good. And artistic too! This is a serious talent here. :)

That is a wonderful poem! I just started an account that is meant to promote steemit poets! If you are interested, just let me know! I'm not asking for a follow,

Thank you! Tell me what you are all about! :-)

Well, I am new to steemit, but my main goal is to help people who post poetry. With the permission of the author, I will post a poem written by them. If the post makes around 25¢, I will give the original author a chunk of the SBD that I earn from that post. Also, if this account grows larger, I will go back and send the author some SBD as a thank you for helping me grow!

Ummmm how did that get 10 upvotes?😂

Great dark poetry!
Thanks for sharing :)

Steem-on! You too @jcsteem! :D

Hey, I mentioned this account posting poetry earlier, but I am sending this whole thing over to @superbuckles so, if you want your poem posted again, he is the one to talk to!

interesting. posted again? what do you mean?

It is a sad poem, yet entertaining to read. I enjoyed it. I suppose it translates your state of mind.

This makes me want to call 911, I think you captured so completely what you set out to convey @robyneggs Rarely do some of us stop to think what victims may go through which may or may not lead to a horrible end. It is so easy to keep life pretty, but the reality is it's not always that way. And there are many times it may appear that all around us is well and good, but the longer we live the more we come to understand that life may not always be what it seems.

I like it! It's very different from the type of poetry I write, but I think that's why I like it so much. I don't really even know if what I do is technically poetry, but it rhymes and expresses what I want to say. Hopefully your not being held ransom. :)

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The morbid aspect of the poetry really drew me in! Keep it up!

I will keep it up! Thank you for commenting @superbuckles :-0

Taking it to another level, eh Ms. @robyneggs!!! I of course am most impressed and inspired by the recycled materials used for such a creation. The blood is the perfect touch as well.

:-D Thank you for your compliment on my ransom note poem @everlove! Upcycling art is awesome :-) I added the blood in Pixlr editing.