[HAIKU CONTEST] - Write The Best Haiku Poem and Win a Book! 🔴

in poetry •  8 years ago  (edited)

What is a Haiku?

A haiku says a lot with few words; it captures the moment - techniques that Japanese masters developed over centuries. Judging by the examples I have come across, it's just about counting syllables; five-seven-five. The content can be about just anything. Sounds simple, right?

In reality haiku a refined art form that has been cultivated in Japan for centuries, and after World War II with the US occupation of Japan, it has become increasingly popular in the West, especially in the English-speaking world as well as in the Balkans.

There are many different directions, but the core of haiku is to express an intense experience of any nature in simple words. It typically refers to a moment and often about something seemingly quite insignificant. A spider web with raindrops, a flower outside a fence, a trembling petal, the sound of an insect in the evening etc, etc. The clarity is important; the words are to convey what the poet has seen / heard / smelled. However, they should preferably not comment or judge. That is up to the reader. If you want to give a sense of grief for example, you can write about lengthy rain, abandoned houses, a sunken rowing boat - but not about your own aching heart.

Two examples:

First autumn morning:
the mirror I stare into
shows my father's face.
  - Murakami Kijo (1865 - 1938)
Whitecaps on the bay:
A broken signboard banging
In the April wind.
  -  Richard Wright (1908-1960)

Haiku is an easily accessible way of expression, enough 'bondaged' and restricted to stimulate, and so short that you have an overview of it. At the same time, every single word is essential for the totality.

A clear image, something that has been registered by the senses, is what gives the haiku its character. A haiku with two separate and contrasting images, that in some way highlights one another, can be particularly interesting.

The prize

"Clear Light" by Alan Spence, award-winning scottish author and professor in Creative Writing at the University of Aberdeen. From the publisher description: "Clear Light contains 150 haiku bursting with Alan Spence's characteristic verve and wit. Mythic and mesmerising, inspiring and hilarious, these poems shed clear light on the delights, hardships, breakthroughs and frustrations of the world of the momentary. Simple in form, these haiku request a fresh look at the familiar and leave us reeling at how much in the world, from the exotic to the everyday, we have yet to observe."

The rules are simple:

1. The poem has to follow the standards of Haiku

2. It has to be an original poem written by the person entering the contest

3. It has to be in English

4. Post the Haiku in the comment section of this article

I will in 15 days (September 12) decide which author, in my humble opinion, won the contest and thus earned a copy of "Clear Light" by Alan Spence.

Be creative and have fun!

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  ·  8 years ago 

The blue steemit sea beckons
Minnows and whales swim
Necessary tree blossoms

  ·  8 years ago 

It's 7 5 7 rather than 5 7 5. Rearrange it quick! Sad if someone lost on a technicality.

:D love that you made a steemit themed one!

  ·  8 years ago 

Yaeh! I love it!

This is a haiku I wrote and used in a comment to @ericvancewalton but I'll include it here just 'cause I like it:

Walking downhill, my
Back to the sun, I notice
The flowers face me

But here's one for your contest:

Avocado leaf
Droops downward delaying the
Inevitable

beautiful!!

  ·  8 years ago 

Steem, will it rise up...
As the leevy breaks at dawn
Who am I to tell?

gravestone blocks our web
from being any longer
locks our quest in wind

ammit eating ghosts
like pacman across the screen
of our existence

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

here's a deep haiku
today i will remember
to myself be true

these thoughts we're thinking
exist in some dimension
real as rocks and trees

I love doing political Haikus in German language (already posted some on steemit) ... so here comes my first one ever written in English:

Summer of warfare...
Pointing out the differences!
So much uselessness.

yes, useless is the word
thanks a lot for your contribution!

  ·  8 years ago 

Lost in the timeless
I found the ancient beauty
Sleeping endlessly

  ·  8 years ago 

Style your post markdown
Post your style at the mark down
Don't! Miss team, miss steem!

Poetic pasta
Linguistic as linguini
No-nonsense noodles

haha fabulous!

back bending rainbow
stretching through horizons
leads lost to lucky

Obstacles remain
Overcoming is a must
A free world awaits

(join us)
:)

yes!

  ·  8 years ago 

After 24 years on and off in Japan I have grown to love Haiku. It is great that they also work in English .
"It`s not like anything
You have felt before
Your first love"

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

To win or lose this?
I only wish to survive
The battle of ink

I was worth nothing
with my high tide sandcastle.
Her words consumed me.

Well done! Thanks for entering the contest!

either
ether
or both

Root of all evil -
Money makes people stupid
But please upvote, k?

I love this modern haiku! :)

Girls dressed in school cloths
Shivering cold morning dew
Shoes are on wrong feet

Just one about my day in life. :)

lovely!

There is mystery
in the questions and answers
that we never ask

Ambiguous! I like it!

You have won the Haiku competition, congrats! I will be making a post about it today. Could you please mail me your real name and address to [email protected] so I can send you "Clear Light" by Alan Spence.

Thank you! This was a great surprised to get on a Monday :) emailed. and looking forward to "Clear Light"!!

  ·  8 years ago 

Lying on the bed
Birds singing the
Songs I taught them

Man I suck at this :c

I like it! Don't be so hard on yourself :)

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

Impossible shine
Coal black fur reflecting blue
Each strand a rainbow

(My brain is creaking
Haiku is hard very hard
A mental workout)

One of the best so far, thank you for your contribution!

  ·  8 years ago 

Thank my dog he's freakishly shiny.

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

After walking more than 15 km today, and still on the road (at roadside cafe waiting to continue in the morning) here is mine:

Endless road stretches
It runs towards horizon
Sun beats down on me

Also 400th post, yay! :-D

I sit at my desk
wanting to be someplace else
winds fill my mind's sails

  ·  8 years ago 

Deserted land: dry
trees without leaves face the sky,
In clouds, sun disguise.

  ·  8 years ago 

A body was found
By crew in a ship on sea
But, she is living

  ·  8 years ago 

Digital coins clink
When paper fails to draw your
Faith in its value

Iraq: Soul Taker
Thank you for your children's time
Nightmares! Love The Man

  ·  8 years ago (edited)

War, newborn creature
Peace weaning the hungry child,
Modifying self.

  ·  8 years ago 

Little cat butt cheeks
Shift against my full white board
As I check Steemit

cute :D

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thank you!

test

haphazard, chaotic, momentus, and absurd
bipolar, extremist, untimely, and unreserved
as understanding dives off the brink
we aimlessly look still for a link

pretty and witty and it rhymes
soulful, scarce, and kind
drawing from parallel worlds
the sanctity of the freedom to think

a tango with confusion
our stage for delusion
twisted, random, deliberate, and intertwined
ecstatic, despaired , subject, and mine

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This one's not mine but probably the best Haiku I've ever read:

"Baby shoes for sale, unused."

Not a haiku, but still beautiful.