Not Surprising

in poetry •  7 years ago 

All things
began,
by Your hand,
and proceed according,
to Your plan,

men fail,
yet need,
to realize,
nothing takes,
You by surprise.

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began all things,all buy to your procces again according,,to plan,men if fail,yet need to realize,yet nothing takes,really surprised.thank u very much for your good poet of nice poetry..this place to see very beautifill.it is a best poetry of good placevery well done sir.. @tombalistreri

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

All things
began,
by Your hand,
and proceed according,
to Your plan,

Exactly all thing's is in our hands, and how to move, where is move its all depends on you, how to tackle the things. When we are do hard work in our plan and for goals GOD will sure help you in your work and give you success in your right plans.

yes its really nice and yes your are very right as said
All things began,
by Your hand,
and proceed according,
to Your plan,

lovely poetry and great words <3 <3

Wow !!! Nice creativity @tombalistreri
Awesome poem
I have a poem this related.

Amass foreign substance
Abandon the guilt
Among the beautiful scorn
A heathen will be born
Take for yourself
Thresholds surpassed
Throw your self unto this
Terror and hubris.

Everything we start we start it with our hands, and then our imagination comes into play which is necessary to carry on that work, also everyone tries hard and give their best but only a few get succeed.

This is so true that man is the lord of his intentions and achieves for what he strives at the end.

All things
began,
by Your hand,

Thanks a lot for the kind inspiration Tom ;)

Your poetry is amazing and full of wisdom. I can tell you are a very religious man. Every thing is by his will and every thing goes as is planned by him. Great poem though.

is there any place where men do fail... 😎

Poetry is that the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings it takes its origin from feeling recollected in tranquility..
Thanks for sharing such a nice poem😊

when we are starting a work for my system. we think, we success for this system. but sometime we fail that,that time you think you lose everything. but lord give me one more chance to improve your system. nice article keep it up buddy.

We also need to remember that we don't have ultimate control over our lives. We plan what we would like to do, but in the end God controls where we end up going.

Brilliant words my friend!