The time is running so fast
Yet things are moving slow
The light about tomorrow so dim
Yet, I kept hearing a whisper
There are better days ahead
There is hope for tomorrow
The fear of the unknown exists
What an eventful present
Some say its destiny
Some people say it's fate
Wishing the hands of the clock be drawn back
Many laugh abound
The road is rough
I have the conviction
Close to the end of the tunnel
Bright light awaits.
Just a little poetry written years back.
It feels good to post after few days off.
Yet things are moving slow
The light about tomorrow so dim
Yet, I kept hearing a whisper
There are better days ahead
There is hope for tomorrow
The fear of the unknown exists
What an eventful present
Some say its destiny
Some people say it's fate
Wishing the hands of the clock be drawn back
Many laugh abound
The road is rough
I have the conviction
Close to the end of the tunnel
Bright light awaits.
Just a little poetry written years back.
It feels good to post after few days off.
Wow, what a lovely poem with powerful message ! The language was so simple and easy to comprehend with the use of poetic devices which convey the message of the poem to be more meaningful such as repetition and the rhythm. Nice write up. Love it
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Thank you @adeyemidrey. Your comment is highly well thought.
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This is good. Lovely poem
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Thanks learned brother.
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Awesome lines
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Thanks @rebeccafl
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Beautiful poem. You are so good in science and in arts? Wow.
I get the impression of the poem being about longing for your moment in life to be proud with achievement. Your moment is just around the corner turpsy.
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Thank you for your hope-filled words. They are reassurances that are needed.
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No hurry in life.......meanwhile the poem pictured someone who has got so much to do with little time left....unfortunately for this subject, you can't turn back the hands of time.
Nicely written.
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Thanks man. I appreciate it.
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Simple and full of context....tnx for sharing man....am also considering some poetry soon
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Let all the talents out, steemit is big enought to contain it.
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