My partner-in-poems, @mitchelljaworski kept this last round from falling back into the abyss of bitterness, so we've found ourselves in the realm of lighthearted lyrics for now. Read his last entry here: : Heaven
And my response below...
The Silent Question
To tell you a secret
Rich and deep
Kept within
Now unreleased
Should you draw close
A risk, a chance
Be brave, my love
In case I can't
So unsure
This choice before me
Welcomes doubt
Of what's to be
Lost in a world
Where past memories
Fuel the fire
For passion's stories
But then is gone
And now is here
I could be wrong
And that I fear
But hope is strong
When love is true
To wait seems long
Away from you
Alive, inspired
Our time together
Brings forth this wonder
Growing desire
To tell you a secret
Rich and deep
Kept within
Now unreleased
Should you draw close
A risk, a chance,
Be brave, my love
In case I can't.
What's a poem-off, you ask? Just a little thang that started a little bit ago. I read a poem that @mitchelljaworski posted, from his old-school writing days. It reminded me of all of my old-school poems, so I challenged him to see if we could go turn-for-turn and repost long lost words from the vaults of time. No rules apply, and new stuff might just make the mix. Check it out, y'all. Follow the links down the rabbit hole...
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Here are some of my other poems:
Kiss * Clouds of September * Dammed Love * Sunset Blessings * Fadings of Fall * The Friday Blues * Passion Flower * Defining Love * The Way * Sing On * Heartsong * Desire * Trust Again * Solstice Rain * Dreamtime * Morning Mist * Kintsukuroi * Dead Dog’s Lie * Synchronicity * From Darkness * Love’s Last Throes * For Love of the Pub
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Here are some of my other poems:
For posts on emotions, nature, poetry, and scotch,
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Oh look at you my friend, you saw my short structured rhymes and raised me one with some depth. Finding my next submission will indeed be a quest :-)
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Well said, sir; these rounds are going faster! I see your quest is won, but the journey's far from done.
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I was just thinking the same sentiment you expressed in your opening statement.
Beautiful absolutely beautiful. My heart walked with you. I love the flow of this poem.
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Aw, thank you Kubby!
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That is a truly beautiful piece of poetry @uniwhisp :)
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Thank you, Jaynie!
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pleasure angel :)
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I love your poetry sir. You can definitely win in the contests of poetry going around on Steemit.com
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Thank you for your kind words. :)
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