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waiting for february
You are telling me about the week of joy,
while stroking my fingers
full of fun and love
You decide ...
fell asleep and cried dipelukanku
in a long, repeating dream
the shadow of our uncontrollable love
You can call this a beautiful dream
about bright events
which is in my arms
you will be grateful for the poems I wrote for you
in the future or the future thereafter
unless you deny it
if you let the sun be bright
when you wake up from your sleep
and let the cold weather infiltrate
you will be happily bragging in february
angin januari akan segera berlalu
kau bercerita tentang minggu gembira,
sambil mengelus jemariku
penuh suka ria dan cinta
kau memutuskan...
tertidur dan menangis dipelukanku
dalam mimpi panjang yang mengulang
bayangan cinta kita yang tak terkendali
kau boleh menyebut ini mimpi indah
tentang peristiwa-peristiwa terang
yang berada di pelukanku
kau akan mensyukuri puisi-puisi yang kutulis untuk mu
di masa depan atau masa setelahnya
kecuali kau mengingkarinya
jika kau membiarkan matahari terang
ketika kau terbangun dari tidurmu
dan mebiarkan cuaca dingin menyusup
kau akan berbahagia dibualan februari
It's a nice poem, but it's not a renga. Please reread my post or join the writers block to see examples of renga. But again, it is nice. I like the line:
You can call this a beautiful dream
about bright events
which is in my arms
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Ok i'm sorry about that
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upvote back dan follow back dong
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