When I write people often complain about my words. Not everyone is comfortable about the pictures I create and I know in some more censored forums I just might get a ban for skirting edges of lewdness. The truth is I write how I speak with people that are pretty close to me. If you have not heard me use certain terms while chatting with you, know I am either worried about losing your friendship or I feel you are just too sanctimonious. My close associates know my mouth runs rough. My thoughts are worse.
I have issues that I don't often talk about but I write a lot about personal things, issues that people face but dare not talk about. When I write poetry, I feel a certain kind of release from censorship, from societal judgment. It is as if my lips are open and I can finally speak as I feel. It is dangerous thing because poetry can be genteel, bright, teenage, nubile, well dressed, coiffed but I truly do not know how to think in such terms.
Maybe I have a mental state, I don't know. there are times when I see shadows at the corner of my sight. There are times when shadows move and then there is nothing there. hehehehe. Anyways, I am what my society made me.
Both poems are a reflection of my writing when they are random and unedited. I posted them on the mirakee app first before bringing them here. Maybe now you will read me in a different light eh?
Happy hard forking y'all,
©warpedpoetic, 2019.
you are a wonderful writer and poet. I have always liked reading your work. Individual expression is what this wacky ride is all about :) we're all in a mental state, it's just some of us are more aware of it than others.
I will have to find you on Mirakee - though I hardly use the platform anymore as I've been in a cycle of recluse for the last year or so.. ha ha I hardly use any platform but my good intentions are still here!
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Hey Marie good to hear from you again. It's been a minute eh? Thank you for your kind words as always.
Yes indeed, we are in a mental state, some of us. Some are more aware than others.
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I fell off the planet a bit.. ha ha off in my own dimension I guess. Have been spending much of my time learning new things and processing. I think I'll be writing again on here sometime soon though.
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I am expectant. It is even too long
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I love the way you write, the words that you choose, your poetry is always so vivid and raw never apologize for that, it is a gift x poetry should push and provoke!
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Yes poetry should provoke. I like that word provoke. I think poetry should ask questions that ordinary conversations would not ask. In fact literature should seek for answers. Thanks @trucklife-family
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I think that what attracted me to your writing, and keeps me coming back to read is the honesty in your work. The lack of judgmental fear from other. I may not read, or comment on a lot, I read more than I comment, but I do enjoy most of your work.
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I know this and I am grateful. I learnt that, honest writing here on steemit. It is one of the gifts this platform has given me; the ability to write what I feel without being worried about how it would be seen. When ever I post something of my poems on my other social media accounts; facebook, instagram, I get crazy comments. 😂
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I too use(d) Mirakee! I'm sure you've seen as some of my past poems I actually link back to my Mirakee versions.
When you say people complain about your words, you mean in everyday speak, or are people complaining about your poetry?
I hope not! Keep writing, it is great!
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Well folks here are more accepting. It's actually outside social media platforms that I find folks who are not comfortable. I don't care anyway. Lol
Mirakee yaay! I have been using it for a long time although I have deleted and installed it several times. Thanks for stopping by
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Hi @warpedpoetic
I'm the guy who reads in the shadows and i must say your work is amazing. I've been try to reach you on discord but it seems i suck at finding users. This is your gift, this is your intellectual property never be apologetic.
You doing great fam. Need to talk to you soon.
Cheers
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I am always on discord even if I don't interact much. I don't know my discord handle in complete though. Those numbers at the end is curiosity. You will definitely be able to search for me on curie server. I am still there.
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them.
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