Human pt 2
Done in again
Last night was absolute pain
Why did I go
I should've stayed home
I hoped it wouldn't be so soon
I hate feeling blue
I ended up regretting
Everything that I had built between us
Now I feel like I should've just kept to myself
Should have left my feelings on the shelf
I was stupid to think you'd be different
There is no escape from the hand I've been dealt
No matter how much I've tried
People will always lie
I stood there like an idiot just watching
My heart broke and I felt like votching
I was already beat from this week
I wish I stayed home and enjoyed a good sleep
I'm done with emotions
They're just ridiculously flawed notions
I don't want to have to look in someones eyes
That's gonna be my downfall and demise
By Ethan
2017/07/29
Great post!
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Your poem is thought provoking. It hints at sadness and pain, yet you show images that makes me think of comics and heroes. I like it!
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Thanks bud, I got quite hurt and it's slowly getting better...
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The anime is nice, but if you really want to get serious about your writing you should checkout the works of Alexander Nimos and other writers like that.
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Eventually I will but at the moment I'm just expressing in the time being.
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Lucifer was once an angel. Never trust
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That was deep!Great poem with matching Kaneki image.
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very true mate
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Great work, lovely prose.
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That's a great poem, love the images too:)
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I'm glad I can read brilliant poems on Steemit.
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i should have wrote poetry in college. This expresses perfectly the feelings that I felt. Thanks for sharing and just know life and relationships get better with age.
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I hope so :D
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first photo is so true and your poem also...really deep!
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Keep putting yourself out there, if your honest with yourself, you'll come across someone else you can be honest with, and that is the first, most important part of love and trust. Great poem, been there, scarred, afraid to put myself out, the pain of endings stopping starting.
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The picture is very similar to Bleach anime.
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It is called tokyo ghoul, It is really good
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Nice feeling and deep meaning from a heart which cry without tears but your fingers bleeding to write such great poem like that. Thank you for sharing.
I learnt the Arabic literature. I love it.
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Thanks mate :)
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Good stuff, thanks for the post!
Did you mean vouching instead of votching? For a moment there, I was like 'aw yisss new word to learn', but I don't think it is a word so probs a typo xD
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t's a slang that we use in my country for throwing up :)
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lame
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how so?
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That's hilarious, monsters, driven many are, by those who then accuse them of being such...ahhh life is damn interesting. Keep up the great posts! We need valuable content such as this and not greedy garbage. Great synergistic content. Even as a bit of a "off the chain" poet myself, still...this made my moment!
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Thank you, I make it my mission to try my best :)
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Keep expressing your feelings because it helps to relieve the emotional turmoil battling inside you. If you hadn't gone you would have wondered what if I didn't go. I know it's hard but sometimes we have to see the ugly to move forward. It hurts yes, like H_ll! But don't stop searching for the right one. It is hard to find the true and right person. Sometimes it happens when you are not looking. It's okay to retreat for a bit to heal, but don't give up and stay hidden. Time....give it time.
I recently went through my own hurts and pains and let it fester inside. I was pulling myself down until I reached rock bottom. Today I had an aha moment and like you, I finally released everything and wrote it all down in an article. Everything just flew out .... the words, the feelings, the disappointments. After I completed it and posted, I felt like a very heavy burden was lifted off my chest. I am much more at peace now and now I can go forward and heal. Expressing is really a great way to let it go. I can write poetry like you do so I write what is on my mind.
Hang in there! It is easier said than done but give time a chance. One day you will look back and realize that there is more to life than just hurt and pain........Cabbagepatch
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Very true, I do need time and I won't isolate myself, but I am sick of being the second best or finishing last. It hurts like hell and I experience it over and over.
I have accepted it for the most part and realised that nothing is going to change and with that I Find a bit of comfort.
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Don't think of yourself as being second best. Think of it as it as it was not meant to be this time. The Universe puts many twists and turns in our life path and we need to go with the flow. You need to feel that it was their loss and not yours. Focus on you and work toward becoming a stronger you. Unfortunately, girls tend to gravitate toward the guys who are hard to get. It must be some sort of primitive trait of the chase. High school is so cliquish and socially there is a lot of cronyism going on. Just survive it and more forward in one piece. You must have an old soul making you much more above these others. One day you will find the right people. It is a matter of patience and time. Hang in there! Your time will come. Trust me! ........Cabbagepatch
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Your words mean a lot to me, My friend also said something along those lines, he is six years older than me and told me that I need to work on me, it was her loss. But even so I feel like I always fall short
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Good one buddy, well written. Keep up the good work.
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vote for vote
vote my recent 5 post i will vote your recent 5 post
thx
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upvoted: nice poetry...please check it out my poem also about friendship:https://steemit.com/photography/@mrblu/alone-makes-us-lonely-but-when-true-friends-come-along-its-great
and also this https://steemit.com/kr/@mrblu/my-brother-and-sister-be-aware-on-this-world-what-happen-if-you-die-where-you-go-after-death-heaven-and-hell-is-real
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Will do :)
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i am your biggest fan right now
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Why is that?
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i like your writing skill and the use of anime pictures to give it blending pictorial feel to your poem
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Thank you :)
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