Poem / Pouring rain

xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) in poetry • 7 years ago

Pouring rain

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I stand here in the pouring rain
I stand here all alone again
I'm wordrin' will this ever end
My back's starting to sag 'nd bend

Feels like the weight of the world
Feels like all I can do is hurl
The feeling's quite sickening
A lump in my throat's formed it's thickening

My hands are shaking
My heads trembling and quaking
I've slept long enough
My soul needs awakening

There's nothing that fits quite right
I'm nothing in people's sight
I'm not what they're looking for
My life's becoming more of a bore

No one looks at me that way
I've been searching everyday
Maybe they'll show up tomorrow
To free me from sorrow

Actually I'm not sad.
I am perfectly happy being alone
But I can't progress anymore
I need someone to share my happiness with
I need someone I can contest for

Here in this rain
I don't feel any pain
I just feel stuck
There's no way I can move further up

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By Ethan
2017/09/08

Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed! If you did and want to hear more you can follow me here (^~^) <(^~^<)

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7 years ago by xxsenpaixsamaxx (69)

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mzansi (44) · 7 years ago

Congratulations!!

As a Team South Africa member, and due to the high quality of your post, you have been chosen to receive a well-deserved upvote from @mzansi 🇿🇦

Keep up the great work!! 😁

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cabbagepatch (61) · 7 years ago

First of all I've always loved the rain! I remember some of those lonely days I would look out my window and watch the rain. For some reason it was a healing balm with its patter against the window panes and the downward fall seemed to say, we are here. Then your beautiful poem was so heart felt. There is always a void because one of our life's mission is to fill it. Along life's path you will encounter many experiences that will fill some of the void until the truly special one will complete it. Be patient and always hopeful. Positive thoughts will bring in positive encounters. Have a great day Ethan. I will resteem because this was a very special poem!!! :D

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Thank you :D I really appreciate the time you take to read my posts.
I wrote this poem while I was talking with a friend, I told her I was sick of being lonely and she told me not to be sad, without hesitation I was able to say that I'm pretty happy, I just wanna share it :)

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cabbagepatch (61) · 7 years ago

I think you are so special in a very wonderful way. Sometimes I think the people who care the most get hurt the most but maybe it is to make us stronger and deeper to be able to feel and express the pain of how people treat each other. Life is hard but it is also wonderful. We just have to cherish the good and happy and learn from the hardships. You Ethan are a wonderful and sensing individual who one day will find a wonderful gift at the end of your rainbow! .....Cabbagepatch! :D

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panopticalvia (56) · 7 years ago

@xxsenpaixsamaxx

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mrblu (62) · 7 years ago

thanks @gavvet for always supporting my master @xxsenpaixsamaxx

we love his poem.."ethan"#@xxsenpaixsamaxx thanks for wonderful poem ..
you share..

you made our day so complete.when reading your poem.we thank you for that buddy..

kindly support me also on my journey on this community..
anyway kindly see my post..

im celebrating my 300 plus followers .your upvote is very much appreciated..
hope @gavvet see it too..he/she love poem..thanks and more power to you..and more poems to write..thanks for giving me a chance buddy..@xxsenpaixsamaxx
https://steemit.com/steemit/@mrblu/poem-to-my-followers-and-steemit-special-thanks-for-being-here-with-me-following-my-post-steem-poem

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wrayca (49) · 7 years ago

Thanks for sharing...

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jesusdmc98 (42) · 7 years ago

I love you poem!!

keep it up!!

my respects.

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rayanfearon (37) · 7 years ago

you are welcome

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syami (44) · 7 years ago

The heart is cleaned of it's pain after the rain. Nice poem, I upvoted and re steemed and I'm following you.

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Thank you I appreciate it :)

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gnovik (25) · 7 years ago

WOW . .

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rayanfearon (37) · 7 years ago

I can see this working out nicely for you keep up the good works u will always get my upvote

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Thanks for your support :D

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rabeel (71) · 7 years ago

so so nice, very attractive and heart touching stuff in your poem. i really like that thanks for sharing now me waiting for your nxt post. thnks

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Thank you for reading :D

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lad4ibk (31) · 7 years ago

Nice
https://steemit.com/poem/@lad4ibk/10-words-poetry-with-the-word-sweat

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solsal (43) · 7 years ago

Beautifully written.
Check out my post https://steemit.com/food/@solsal/wonders-of-watermelon-seeds

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ziadelgarhy (39) · 7 years ago

Yes, I also need awakening

My hands are shaking
My heads trembling and quaking
I've slept long enough
My soul needs awakening

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poetic-power (64) · 7 years ago

@xxsenpaixsamaxx U always write a beatifull poetry, why ? Do u have a secret behind ? Tell me if u have it. Ur poetry always make me melted, just like hot chocolate, it taste sweet, bitter, and thick. But its make an addiction,..

Please keep write, and go to see my post sometimes, bcoz i write poetry too, but im just a newbi

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

You will get better at it :D
I don't have any secrets, I just write from the heart

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helpfulhillbilly (33) · 7 years ago

Pouring rain is a name for a poem. Very powerful! My endorsement of you poem will boost your advocates.

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Thanks, I appreciate it

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johnwjr7 (53) · 7 years ago

Very nice. I like poetry for some reason. Not all of it, but most. I try to write some too, but I'm not sure of how good it is. Maybe you can check out some of mine at @johnwjr7 and give me your opinion. I don't have only poetry though, so you'd have to search for it. I'll try to get some closer to the top right now.

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Thanks, I will have a look :D

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athenabree08 (57) · 7 years ago

I love it.. someday u'll find the right one in Gods time. Just wait patiently. Make the most out of it. Cheers! (Upvoted)

Please take time to read my recent post. Your upvote will highly appreciated. Thank you.

https://steemit.com/poetry/@athenabree08/temptation-in-poetry

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Will do, Thanks for you constant support :D

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thegoliath (66) · 7 years ago

Enjoyable and well written poem, thank you.

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mrblu (62) · 7 years ago

@thegoliath i have a poem shared with you also..

https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-the-power-of-illusion

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stanleephenom (45) · 7 years ago

awesome post @xxsenpaixsamaxx .
i really love to see more of this
followed and upvoted

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littlerph (51) · 7 years ago

Rain, the most magical thing the world could offer. A very nice poem this is @xxsenpaixsamaxx. Well done.. :)

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leslyfay (55) · 7 years ago (edited)

nice poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx ..i like it..i'm starting following you and i upvoted already you post.

@xxsenpaixsamaxx ,i have a 3 recent poems,take time to read.hope you like it.
your upvote will really appreciate ..thank you and more power..

https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-5-in-search-of
https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-3-i-will-love-you-anyways
https://steemit.com/philippines/@leslyfay/poerty-4-the-butterfly-moth

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ahmadredha (58) · 7 years ago

Very beautiful and meaningful post.
Bravo 👏

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elladinenolana (9) · 7 years ago

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steemeupscotty (31) · 7 years ago

I really enjoy your poetry and I just followed you. I have just written some of my own. Please check some of mine out and tell me what you think. I just joined Steemit a couple of days ago. Thanks for the great poem. @steemeupscotty

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xxsenpaixsamaxx (69) · 7 years ago

Will do bud :D I'm glad you enjoyed it ☺

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miky (52) · 7 years ago

Very wonderfull poetry..usefull..

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