Through the fire and the flames
Through the fire and the flames
Will you be with me all the way?
Will you stand by my side day by day?
Will you be there for me if I go insane?
Will you share my burdens?
Be there when I'm hurtin'?
Will you help me grow?
Will you drag me by the nose?
Will you correct my course?
Will you pick me up and set me on my horse?
Will you be frank?
When I'm overstepping my boundaries
Will you deal with my idiocy?
And know when to take me seriously?
Will you be able to withstand all my mannerisms?
And take all my sarcasm?
Will you put up with my stubbornness?
And shy me away from covetousness?
Will you keep track of my emotional beings?
And stop them from getting out of hand and fleeing?
Will you be there everyday?
Through the fire and the flames?
By Ethan
2017/06/29
These are just a couple of thoughts I had while thinking upon my future. The woman that I land up with doesn't have to be perfect, she just has to be tolerant ☺
DISCLAIMER: I know this is a title of a famous song and it's what inspired this poem but nothing in the poem is taken out of the song
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My try at it:
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Play this song on Expert,
And your hands will be too.
In all seriousness, good job. I really like this!
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Maaaan thanks for the memories
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Thank you :) I like the attempt :D
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You are a real hard worker! Great job , I love your work
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Thank you!
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I total agree with u
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Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Dragonforce!!
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Through the fire and the flames we carry onnnnnnnn !!
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So now we're flying we're freeeeeee!!!!!!
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possibly one of the greatest songs ever made
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Wow!!! So refreshing!! A true lover can produce such lyrics. Thanks buddy!!! you got a new follower and a vote. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you :)
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Great poem !
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Very good lyrics! Congrats!
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Opportunities form great people, follow me and I follow you thanks
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awesome lyrics.......i like it..
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hi i am folowing you, folow me back and upwote one of my posts like i did for you :)
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Nice poem.
Typo perhaps in the second line?
Will you be with me all the way?
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thank you will fix, i fixed it when i first typed it out
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inspirational !!!! great!!
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It's crazy cause I was reading in song and look how the post ends...with a song lol but anywho good work and keep on creating.
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thank you :)
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Your poem is really great. This is my reply to your poem: --
Through the fire or flame alive,
I will become your courageous surprise,
It won't matter if either in heaven or hell,
I will cherish you all the way with my burning shell,
Shall all the world will disappear,
Through the fire or flame,
I will be with you everywhere.
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This is amazing, makes me feel reel good, thanks for sharing !
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Ethan, what an impactful poem full of honesty, hope, and desire. It can actually be extended to family and friends in addition to that significant other. Wouldn't it be wonderful to find that special person who would be there for you in times of need, to pick you up or set you straight? To understand the ups and downs, the ins and outs, the highs and lows, the fires and cold, etc. We all seek the same and frequently we get hurt or disappointed. But I promise you, in your long life journey, your path will cross these special people. Just keep your eyes, heart and inner being open when they do come into your life so you can embrace them. Trust me, its worth the challenges and obstacles. Keep up your beautiful writing. I see so much growth in your poems and the love and effort you put into them. I really believe in you.......Cabbagepatch
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Thank you, as always you leave me so touched :) thank you for always commenting and making my day :)
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The person who answers yes would be your soulmate... And I don't even know that I believe in soulmates, but this type of relationship is worth holding on to. That person who will do this manner of support deserve loyalty and love. The true test in relationships is standing close when there is a fire for one or the other.
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Very true, If they can go through hell with you they are worth keeping :)
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Nice post,
Love seeing all kinds of artists on here.
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love this!
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Love your work..maybe sometime check out my work..need critics
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We might burn with fire... burning with love and fire...
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nice poem man, good question is who can take the fire... :/
But when you find someone you love you fight to protect what you have. Its when you don't like your other poem said the strings detach and then create gaps/spaces. Love shouldn't allow this, if it does its not worth it!
Cool poem! followed :)
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Very true man :) I appreciate it
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As a poet says
"It does not matter whether,
Tis sun or rain or stars or shine,
If we are together"
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Very true :)
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thanx for being agreed.....:D
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