#3: Original Poem - Untitled

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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The moment that I tried to look at your face
I suddenly felt that my heart was at race
I can't get control to regulate my mind
Looking at you I feel like I'm twined.

I longed for the day that your eyes meets with mine
yet your presence makes everything looks fine
You don't say a word but why i felt relieved?
It seems everything I dreamed was achieved.

You were not attractive, neither you are fame
but why in my heart I scream out your name
Im dying inside cause I want to hear your voice
and I'll be dying inside if you say Im not your choice.

To see your face a day makes me feel complete
Inside of me was singing, dancing with the beat
Even you are far, away from my sight
I'll still find a way, more decent and right.

If only I could paint you here on my pillow
I wouldn't be sad nor feel like I'm hollow
but I won't do such thing I want realistic
I'll carry my own desire, my own real stake.

Yes I liked you even you didn't know
And I have no plan to spoil it all to you
It doesn't matter If Im the one who's talking
Just remain the same, let's talk the same thing.

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You did a great job. Beautiful heart-felt poem. Hope you keep writing!

you love nature, you love to help people, you love literature......amazing dear @r2cornell. i am very happy to stay with you

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

i knew you love nature @r2cornell

yeah sir..its amazing writting..
talented...
thank's for resteeming sir @r2cornell

keep it up

Aww thank you so much Sir for the compliment. Well appreciated. Thank you for the resteemed. 😍

i knew you love nature.but you love literature also dear @r2cornell

Good writing . Love to read it........

Great poetry ☺

Thank you. Followed you 😊

You are talented..upvoted!

Thanks . 😊

Who caught your heart to make you write this peom? 😍😍😍😍

Wala naman ate ging.. 😌😂

Nice poetry!Thank you. ❤️

Thank you 😊

lovely poem, you have a talent in writing, keep it up :) resteemed and upvoted.

Thank you po @libsyas 😌

wonderful poetry post. i love poem. great work. awesome writing nice article. thanks for @zhayie03

Thank you so much. 😍

agee ano!

Nice poetry

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