Steemit Poetry Contest #14 + Winners of #13!

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My Greetings To You!


What are you doing to me? I was late with the publication for several days... I couldn't CHOOSE! I re-read about 30 poems from the primary selection... and to exclude more than 20 excellent entries was really not easy! The theme was very interesting thanks for your thoughts and interpretations!


I am really very grateful to you all! Good luck and success to you, friends!






The theme for Steemit Poetry Contest #14 - Words





About Prizes:


First Place - 8 SBD

Second Place - 7 SBD

Third Place - 6 SBD

Fourth Place - 5 SBD

Fifth Place - 4 SBD

Sixth Place - 3 SBD

Seventh Place - 2 SBD

Eighth Place - 1 SBD




Entries will be accepted within five days from the date of publication of an announcement!

Deadline - February 9 3:00 PM UTC





The winners of the Steemit Poetry Contest #13



1st Place - "The Doll" by @bennettitalia



The one you love most is the last you'd suspect,

but a doll in your likeness, with pins in its neck,

tucked away in the back of a drawer in her vanity's

not a good sign: you question her sanity.



A tickle in your throat makes you cough as you look

through cupboards, closets, boxes, and books...

In the pantry: carved with strange sigils there stands

a broom, made of real wood, polished by hand,



unnoticed before. Now restless, you keep

waking only to search features softened by sleep.

One night, catlike, she'll rise with the moon

and fly to the sky on her polished wood broom!






2nd Place - "Wrong Party" by @okramer



Some dudes prepare for clubbing with a beer

and suddenly the leader has a great idea:

“I have a plan for getting laid tonight!

We'll sneak into a lady's night!”



Instead of jeans and muscle shirts

they put on wigs and dress in skirts

and when the bouncers let them go inside

they praise themselves for being bright



they toss their wigs and put on pants

and watch the girls begin to dance

but when they see them fly around in capes

it dawns on them they made a big mistake...






3rd Place - "Everyone's a Witch" by @spellmaker



When the darkness comes and the moon rises

Skeletons come out of closet and fight.

Where is the line between me and the Moses?

How is the darkness turning to light?



Words! They can tell you good night.

Or worse! They can bring out the fire and might.

Spelling - compelling my life!

I'm telling you - words are there to be right.



Write! You're a witch. You're a bright.

Trust in your self. Your body and sight.

Try! More you miss, more you smile.

Answers are here. Just stay for a while.






4th Place - "Bewitched" by @marcoriccardi



A soothing shroud of silent, sacred night,

When sorrow sleeps and savage dreams flow true.

The sky reverberates a new star’s light,

My soul, alike, vibrates because of you.



Out of the corner of my eye, a ghost,

An evanescent shade of eerie might,

Female, enchanted spell in which I’m lost,

I, clumsy, earthly male with damn poor sight.



You laugh at me, but I’m already deaf.

I’m only a man bewitched just for love.

Your coven plays around me in alto clef,

Your dance is doom for me yet, a hell shove.






5th Place - "Dance Night" by @carrieallen



We gather together every 13th

Dance in the moonlight and pray to the gods

We call those above and some from beneath

Offerings we bring to favor our odds.



Men in the village provide what we need

Then kiss us sweetly, and we're on our way

With our carriage full, pulled by the best steed

We'll see them again at the break of day.



The path is clear, blanketed in moonglow.

The ritual begins, soon in a trance

Our songs cause the trees to bend and billow

By 'morrow we know nothing but the dance.






6th Place - "My Sisters and My Daughters" by @chrisroberts



The foulness and the fairness of this thick and frosted night

Arouses demons, devils, dragons' fire.

My sisters and my daughters on the prowl 'til morning's light

Will follow where I wallow in the mire.



Insanity, it beckons as I seek some things for brew:

A monkey's heart, a badger's leg and fang,

A hair from a neglected child, a genius's breakthrough,

The vocal chords of birds that never sang.



So fly my coven mistresses, my sisterhood of sin,

These portions of my potion seek to find.

Then sure enough I'll conjure stuff to make me young again,

To live forever, doing deeds unkind.






7th Place - "Salem Brooms" by @robhimself1



I cast a spell upon you, to draw you in to see,

Our coven here in Salem, where all we witches be,

Yes Salem town, please walk around, go get yourselves some rooms,

We'll need you here come witching hour, when we ride our Salem Brooms.



Our cauldrons have been bubbling, filled with a foul brew,

A toad, a newt, and owl's eye, it's boiling just for you,

So sit right down, don't move an inch, I promise you'll see soon,

Just why we need you here with us, when we ride our Salem Brooms.



Now take a sip, don't mind the taste, you may find it kind of nice,

The aftertaste won't linger long for our human sacrifice,

For broomsticks can't just fly alone, out of the muck and gloom,

Your blood instills a magic power upon our Salem Brooms.






8th Place - "To Put Things Straight" by @viraythewitch



We don‘t worship the devil

We wouldn‘t hurt a child

Not one of us is evil

Most are meek and mild



There is this picture painted

From ancient fearful men

That still has not yet fainted

Of old hags in a den



We like nature and kittens

Is that really a sin?

Some knit their own black mittens

But we all have light within






Rules of The Contest!


  • Only one entry is allowed.

  • Your entry-post must be tagged both #poetry and #poetrycontest

  • The Title must be "SteemitPoetryContest #(with the number of the actual episode)" + the name of your poem.

  • You can use any types of rhyme - End rhyme, Cross rhyme, Internal etc.

  • The size of the poem - three quatrains (one quatrain = four lines).

  • Do not steal! The contest is only original works!






I wish everyone good luck and creativity!





Let's make STEEMIT more interesting and varied together!



Sincerely, Terry Craft.



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Here is my entry to the poetry challenge.

Faster and Mightier

G'day, @terrycraft, and Bravo to all the winners!

Kindly find, here, my light-hearted entry for #14—I hope it tickles :)

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Words with Bots

Bless their tinny hearts,
it’s a thankless task
doling out love, in parts,
whenever we ask

Machine, save my face
but, please, hide your own
Secure me a place
high up, not low down

on that Trending List
where champions live
Never mind, it’s fixed—
that's our secret, Give!”

@yahialababidi

haha I love it

Here is my entry https://steemit.com/poetry/@isteemithard/steemitpoetrycontest-14-pirate-words
Pirate Words
~
All hands hoy, heave ho or shark bait for the sea,
swashbuckling seadogs, blow the man down, an eye for an eye.
Avast ye now batten down the hatches, there's land we see,
feed the fish of Davy Jones' locker, walk the plank, aye aye.

Hornswagglers get a hempen halter ye hear,
so we pillaged pieces of eight until the conch shell blew.
Blimey lad, cleave a buccaneer to the brisket with this cutlass here,
no privateers nor scallywag landlubbers, just old salt sailing the blue.

Up in the crow's nest, the lookout keeps sight for low tide,
strung high from the mizzen, a black flag of Jolly Roger held tight by knot.
Run a rig, run a shot across the bow, keelhaul ropes tied,
bring a spring upon'er, the shallows we go not.
~
copyright2018 steemit.com/@isteemithard - image source

Where Words Go To Die

Across the sea of doubt, beyond the hills of mystery,
There is a place where old words go to die.
"Misconstrued, misunderstood and mystified are we,"
Say words long past, "We cannot tell a lie."

The time has been when stroke of pen could lift a million souls,
But so much goes unwritten now by choice,
Their time is gone, and words move on; the parchments, papers, scrolls
Have vanished, and now silenced is their voice.

Longing for a renaissance, renewal of the word,
The ones who seek the truth will always try
To stop the censors' silly game, the madness they've inferred.
Let words live on in peace and never die.


Thanks, @terrycraft! Your topics are always inspiring! :D

Solid entry!

love it.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Congratulations to all the winners, and thank you for hosting this contest every week.
here is my entry for this week:
The power of a word
Is bigger than you think,
It can hurt you like a sword
Especially after a drink.

So be careful when you talk
And always think twice,
If you're not sure, go take a walk
Cause if you're wrong, you'll pay the price.

The right words could bring you love
As the wrong ones, could bring you hate,
So do as I said above
And be responsable for what you create.

Congrats to the winners and the first place, wow @bennettitalia great poem

Thank you @sayee :)

Just in case you haven't checked all poems :D
https://steemit.com/poetry/@luts/steemitpoetrycontest-14-word-world

Thank you @terrycraft for the opportunity provided by his contest! It's my first contest.
Here is my entry.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@catalina10/steemitpoetrycontest-14-there-would-be-no-space-left

PS: I loved the theme.

Thanks for the prompt @terrycraft, Here's my Entry

Here's my entry: Word Cloud

Hi, this is my first entry for this contest :)

https://steemit.com/poetry/@dhannabao/steemitpoetrycontest-14-fugitives

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Congrats to the winners. It's well deserved.
Here's my entry this week.

https://steemit.com/poetry/@gilmored/which-words-which-way-steemit-poetry-contest-14

Good job to all the winners! Glad to see people I know on the winners' list! Hopefully next week, I could be one of them too.

Here is my entry: https://steemit.com/poetry/@poetrybyjeremy/steemitpoetrycontest-14-watered-words

Awesome topic, I think. It's one I'm familiar with, being a translator and an aspiring writer.

Give my entry a read, you won't regret it:

Our World of Words

First time in your contest @terrycraft ! I hope you enjoy my poem, it's the first time I post one in English ;) . Here's my entry:

Your Words

Here is my entry: https://steemit.com/poetry/@josejirafa/steemit-poetry-contest-14-pages-of-life

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Pages of Life

The world is my book
My little gospel of truth
Of memories, moments, time took
The narrative of my youth

Every circumstance is a story
Tales not so rare to man
For the deeds we once felt sorry
Once were said and done

Each day is a chapter
Fragments of my identity
Reach for that quill and paper
Let dreams become reality

This is my entry for Steemit Poetry Contest #14
https://steemit.com/poetry/@ydal/steemitpoetrycontest-14-tongue-tied

@terrycraft Here's my Steemit poetry contest #14 entry A Memory of You!

Here is my entry for the contest... https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@seesladen/steemit-poetry-contest-14-the-perfect-bliss

Inspiration came in it's tiniest form,
A little motivation and then it all begun,
And in his study, scribbling on a sheet,
This teen wrote words, filled with wisdom and wit...

As he wrote, time flew fast,
And with a flourish, he was through with the last,
Inspiration, rigged into twelve lines,
With sweet sounding melodious rhymes...

Then he beheld it, in silent awe,
T'was perfect, these words men would adore,
And with a quick yet gentle kiss...
He titled it ''the perfect bliss''... These words...

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Not sure if I did it right but here's my entry: No Words

Congratulations to the winners

Here is my entry @terrycraft :
when the words came along
Wish me luck ^_^

Oh my, I'm actually amongst the best eight performing a little happy-dance
Thanks a lot for the contest in general and again for choosing my poem @terrycraft :) It's great that you take the time and read everything!
The next subject is a bit more difficult, I guess, since my relationship to words is a bit ambivalent at times...
Have a great and magical day, everyone ;)
(still dancing)

Good luck with "words"!

P.S. Don't stop your dance ^ ^

Never ever stop dancing. It is your dance that makes the heart smile!

Glad you enjoyed some of the darker poems submitted! Nice to win again, thanks for putting these on :D

Thank you! Without you, it would not have been :)

Baby’s Early Words:

The first word spoken by a baby,
There is none other than my mommy,
He wants his noon meal to be ready,
Quick and easy because he is needy.

The second word spoken by a baby,
There is none other than my daddy,
He wants daddy to be his “horsee”,
For him to gallop to his play party.

The third word spoken by a baby,
There is none other than “I’m poopy”,
He calls mommy his diaper is dirty,
And he calls daddy to get his potty.

Bows to @terrycraft.
Here's my entry.

The Signified and the Signifiers


They say that pen is mightier than sword,
when used to resonate with brain wave chords.
And I hope you'll not think me too unt'ward
for considering each and every word.

Using words properly, our mental test,
Understanding symbols is of int'rest.
Our words signify reality's depth;
defining concepts is a mystic quest.

Light philosophy that floats on the breeze
or heavy leather tomes filled with treatise,
since the ancient times of wise Socrates
words have been used to bring men to their knees.

Great job! :)

Good thing! I´ve just came upon your contest and will contribute in a day or two (the piece I´m going to contribute isn´t in English, I´ll have to translate therefore). Have a good time so far! (O, yes, I´ll follow you right away (upvote included). Rolf from the Czech republic

There were indeed some fantastic entries this week! :D

I love the next topic, too. Words. Some of my favorite things are words.

peace good people, really enjoying the reads! much power to everyone!

Here's my entry. hope you enjoy!
https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@wolfnworbeikood/steemit-poetry-contest-14-words-x-sword

Words are Swords
dandy loin's or daggers
scorn and consul
to behold the mourning of a soul once considered tied...

becoming unraveled seems to tighten the last bond I have with me
we pierce hearts
as what is spoken slices through air like yoshimitsu's blade
we remain.

"I am" is all there is
all there was
and all there will be
swords cut deep but word is bond!

I will follow this poetry contest

I'll be entering for sure! Thanks for the opportunity.

i have a big passion in poetry. so love to join this contest

Good luck! ^^

Hi there. This comment is to let you know that your contest has been included in @moneyinfant's Steemit Writing Contests: Issue #11. The list is updated on a daily basis and your contest will remain on the list until its expiration - there's nothing you need to do.

The list was created to save writers the excessive amount of time spent searching through the #contest tag for writing contests. Now they can just come to the list each day, see new contests and use their time doing what they love - writing.

If you'd like to help spread the word about the Steemit Writing Contest list I'd really appreciate a resteem, but it certainly isn't necessary. The project is simply meant to help writers save time and contest creators attract more contestants.

Have a Steemy Day!

P.S. If you know of any contests I've missed I'd love to hear about them. Thanks!

Done, just wrapped up my first.

This looks like a fun challenge. I will have to give it a try!

MY first time to join this contest, I hope I am not yet late.
Here is my entry:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@yadah04/steemit-poetry-contest-14-words

Oh wow... 1st place! It's an honor, thank you :) Congratulations to all of the winners!

I'm really enjoying this contest, both writing and reading 😍

Enjoy :)

Thanks @terrycraft for this opportunity...i just posted my entry...link
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dejojennifa/steemit-poetry-contest-14-a-new-day

how to contest this?

I say a very big thank you to the host of this contest I believe talents would be uncovered

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Congratulation to all the winners!
Here is my entry....
https://steemit.com/poetry/@abdulazizganiyu/steemitpoetrycontest-14-cold-breeze

'Cold breeze'

It strikes me as a bright day
Till i felt the cold breeze of despair
For i have lost yesterday
And tomorrow still holds its fears

And my mind is unrest
For the bitter part of myself i try to hide
And for every move i pretend its a test
But the cold breeze on my face is still felt

And at the end of days my steps not be wiped off
For i shall walk on a path that engraves my footstep
But i shall not walk alone
Till night fall i shall be put off

Here is my entry

The Strangest Thing

Words are utterly complicated
"Dip" and "deep" sounds the same but are not related
Why does "q" always needs the letter "u"?
Why "big" and "huge" are similar but different too?

There are words that are short like "I" or "a"
Or as long as the word "onomatopoeia"
Tired of hearing the word "love" being said?
You can try hundreds of other languages instead.

Words are such strange things
But are also powerful just as a supreme being
For without it there's no song,story and poetry
These letters mean nothing and you can't quite understand me.

Wow! This is the first time that I participate in the contest and I finished 4th! 😀
Thank you! I will take this and the futures contests too, for sure

I will take this and the futures contests too, for sure

I hope! :)

Here it is!

Imperfect sophistication

I’ve never been the finest weaver
Of words that shelter from human storm
Or caress the soul, and could relieve her
Bleeding, so different and so equally warm.

In the verge of the night, when she’s alone
And darkness pours its demons inside,
Words are twines of a kite just flown
With which she whips herself to subside.

This is the imperfect nature of our kind
That even the most sophisticated thing we made
Isn’t worth the value of a simple gust of wind
That brings us the calm rustling of a grassy glade.

Wow, fantastic job!

Also a big thanks from me for hosting this and giving me a price! And congrats to the others as well!

@terrycraft awesome sir..best wishes for winner all done very wll poetry

When things go wrong as they sometimes will,
When the road you're trudging seems all up hill,
When the funds are low and the debts are high
And you want to smile, but you have to sigh,
When care is pressing you down a bit,
Rest if you must, but don't you quit.
Life is strange with its twists and turns
As every one of us sometimes learns
And many a failure comes about
When he might have won had he stuck it out;
Don't give up though the pace seems slow—
You may succeed with another blow.
Success is failure turned inside out—
The silver tint of the clouds of doubt,
And you never can tell just how close you are,
It may be near when it seems so far;
So stick to the fight when you're hardest hit—
It's when things seem worst that you must not quit.

Thanks @terrycraft
This is my entry:

https://steemit.com/poetry/@eulerjnr/steemitpoetrycontest-14-seal-your-mouth-46baaa5668209

SEAL YOUR MOUTH
Let the sky
engulf the heavens.
For I wouldn't smile nor cry,
muted: my buccal would be.

Let the earth be
drowned by the lands,
and see if I would
utter words.

Never will
I call a hag,
a senile woman
in a rag.

Hum just amazing post sir, Thanks to inform us

@upvoted

Good day @terrycraft.
This is my entry sir

https://steemit.com/poetry/@markaparre/steemitpoetrycontest-14-how-could-possibly-be

How could possibly be

That a word changes circumstances

A little bit of sorry

Heartbreak has given now its chances



But a word can break, a word can mend

Don't say a word when you haven't comprehend

And a word can save but it also can lost

Always remember that everything you say has its cost



So now be careful with your word

'Cause it pierces like a sword

But hoping positively with one accord

May it be used to heal someone's broken world

Nice so nice post sir keep it up

it enjoying one ....
thanks @terrycraft

Congratulations to all the winners and thanks for organising such a beautiful contest. Have a great day friend happy steeming.

I am excited to present my very first entry to your poetry contest:

https://steemit.com/poetry/@auminda/steemitpoetrycontest-14-words

hello sir terry! here is my link to my entry! thank you so much for hosting this event!

https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@devjanes/steemit-poetry-contest-14-a-word-for-a-mute

Hi everyone! Thanks for your entries, everyone has an inspiring good read. Here is my entry:

SteemitPoetryContest #14 - Words Unspoken

Cheers to everyone, hope to read more inspiring poetry content soon!

Hi, Terry. Brokemancode sent me over. He thought I might enjoy entering your contest for Words. Thank you for hosting it. Here is my entry. Hope it gives you a chuckle.https://steemit.com/poetry/@prydefoltz/irregardless-entry-for-steemit-poetry-contest-14-words

@terrycraft,
I loved this topic! Congratulations to all the winners. I hope that there are more challenging prompts like this that are both challenging and thought provoking. My entry, Magic Glance, is an excerpt from my book, Zachary Bragg and the Secret Fate of the Winking Witch. I did modify it a bit from the original. When I saw the prompt, I jumped at the chance to enter it.
Thanks again for the awesome contest.
@Lymmerik

Good stuff! I am working on a few short poems myself. I will be sharing and updating my profile soon. I hope to get your support and advice. Cheers my friend!

@levaughnlaw1,
Thank you. Keep writing the good stuff!
@Lymmerik

Good day @terrycraft. Hope you are doing good today. Here's my entry. Hope you like it. 😊

https://steemit.com/poetry/@thot2word/steemitpoetrycontest-14-free-thoughts

Sometimes you need to pull
Draw out all the thoughts from deep within
Like bringing light into darkness
Speaking words into life

They are scattered all about
Likened unto fish in a sea
Gathering them is what I need to do
But it's hard to get a proper net

I have to think about it
Which is what I'm trying not to do
But on a second thought
I'd rather leave them to roam free

Wuhuuu, this is the first time I'm amongst the winners! Thank you @terrycraft for making this contest!

Thank you for your participation and for the wonderful words that form into the poems!

Oh, I didn't miss the deadline? Here's mine.

I was still excited about the last one that I almost forgot to write my entry in this! But - almost doesn't count and here I am with a poem;

Perceptiveness

Good luck, everyone!

Hello everyone! Here is my entry for this week's contest, about struggling to find the right ones ;) https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@bennettitalia/steemitpoetrycontest-14-inaccurate

Inaccurate

Slippery fish in an ocean of sound
Little ones, big ones, floating around
Some scream, some whisper, one sings like a lark
Here's a drab one, a fancy one, a glow-in-the-dark

Here's one: you have to experience to get it
Another's ineffable (don't try to eff it)
One says different things to different people
Another sounds good but is actually evil

I did find the right one, but it slipped away
Leaving me grasping at straws all day
So here's a replacement that doesn't quite fit
The meaning I needed: "inaccurate"

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Very nice post boss, keep it up.

hello everyone. I am Rafael from the Philippines. This is my first time to join this contest. I am new in Steemit. Thank you @terrycraft for this wonderful contest. Congrats to the winners and your awesome poems. here is my contribution

https://steemit.com/poetry/@beyonddisability/steemitpoetrycontest-14-words-unspoken

Can you let me know when the next poetry contest is so that I can join in?