SPU Poetry Contest #7: United

in poetsunited •  7 years ago 

All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter,
Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
-Tolkien



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SPU Poetry Contest #7: United

United we are in thought and deed,
United we strive for the righteous to lead.
United we stand to right the wrongs,
United we cry for our defeated songs.
United in love, united it pain,
United in life, united in disdain.
United they storm against the truth,
United they scheme to remain aloof.
United they rule through pain and fear,
United we suffer until destiny is clear.
United we rise to overcome strife,
United we remain to retain life.
United…...United…..United,
United we must be!


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Amazing like an anthem for poets united. :) I adore the solemnity of it! Keep it up Papacrusher.

thanks @chaosreignstv I appreciated the support and feedback!

great poeme

Thanks for taking the time to come by and comment.

You sure are a good poet papa , my fav on this one:

United they storm against the truth,
United they scheme to remain aloof.

Thank you for sharing your poetry with the community, so inspirational.

Thank you so much for your kind words and support. I'm just happy anyone would take the time to read them!

...and, united we prevail, like all poets @PoetsUnited. Just can't help myself from adding that😅 Great choice of theme @papacrusher. I felt really empowered.

Nice addition! It was is if was an unfinished poem and I just needed a little nudge to complete it! Thanks for commenting and "finishing" the poem...lol