RE: SPU Poetry Contest #3: Half-Hearted

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SPU Poetry Contest #3: Half-Hearted

in poetsunited •  7 years ago 

I'm competing with you on the same prompt, but I must say, what a line:

For want of an ocean
In which to swim
My better half:
A phantom limb.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thank you @pragmaticpassion! Just read your entry, beautiful work :) The all-too-familiar experience of confusion, mixed messages, and conflicted emotions in personal relationships, deftly and powerfully sketched. I love your minimalist style: each phrase says just enough to convey everything about everything that matters.

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