Motivational rap I wrote

(verse 1)
It's intimidating why debate it/ life's a phase,a cage,a one page letter to the grave/ addressed to heavens messenger/the only thing we are is repetition raise your kids to live and listen/ what's that do? pave the way for them to go one place everyday/ it's superstition/ taught to chase your pay 5 days a week/ get 2 days rest then repeat/ the process it's complete nonsense/ you use your body to benefit the employer/ you work hard to make more for you/ yet he rakes everything in while your kept at the bottom to do all the work and more for em/and what's that work for anyway retirement? Nah I don't buy that shit/ everyone's a robot these days/ and it's based on the idea hard work equals a good life/, a life where you go day to day off minimum wage/ always striving to survive?/ Where you live paycheck to paycheck you're cave man your barely alive/ and don't even realize it but whatever/ guess this was just some real life shit/ but go ahead and vibe to it/ hear it but don't listen and heed my warning/ because your end will come but what will you have to show for it nothing/
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todays ideals are inefficient/ you can't benefit/ you're taught to be a follower follow him, follow her/ no follow them shit doesn't it make you pissed?/Well you could use your wits/figure it out be independent/ gain some interest boost your image/ instead of being ignorant/ because what's life if your missing it?/ you make excuses about everything/your life,your pain/fuck that learn from it upgrade/ and pave a path/use your past to help motivate your ass/ do this task and you'll bathe In happiness/ because it's no longer the employers life your living/ it's your own so own it and take a bath/
(Verse 2)
Don't let those motherfuckers influence you/ shit on you/and finish you/keep determined and flourish/ as you burn their views to the ground/ take that courage and and turn it around/into success and bet you'll be able to wreck and get a check from it/ trend setting never letting/ another individual leave residual/ damage in your mind/ from their hate and anger just use that as bait to savor/ maybe listen to my cadence to stay never fade/get paid make a statement/ and see the day where you actually make it!/ Living your own life is the payment/ now you may be listening but I ain't your savior/if you see an opportunity take it/ if you fail don't give up just keep playing/ quit laying, around and stop faking it's breaking you leaving you unmotivated
Depressed and full of hatred/ just listen to my advice/ if not fine I can take it/ just don't come crying around when you realize your life's been wasted!/