An invalid ninja in the Steemit Rap Challenge. (17)

Super barred up like maximum security prisons
I love the references, the deep knowledge, the wisdom, the message, your diverse vocabulary, rhymes schemes, flow, and overall structure, you set the bar high with this one, you talk about my rhyme schemes but yours are also super hot Dylan fire, your writing is on point truly, and yes the delivery was pretty good, but we can always improve delivery, I hear flaws in my entry this week as well, I just posted mine. Great job @kaykunoichi, you brought life this week (that's even better than killing it)

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

I think you have the best replies in Steemit my friend. Way to gas me up hehe! About to check yours!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

I will definitely take that compliment to the moon my friend lol I put everything I have into a comment when I map it all out. Glad to gas up your vessel for next week and beyond, please keep it up!
Hope you enjoy mine, a little bit of freestyle singing at the end just because.

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

I am a huge fan of that singing!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Thank you, I know I can do better, but what I put out for now will have to do.
I am one of those artists that will showcase a draft or something unfinished, not polished, because I know I am not promised tomorrow or the next moment, so I always feel compelled to perform a new song or share it right away just in case...cause we never know... you know? Better to share it soon than to let it collect dust as a perfectionists, that is my mind set.

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

That is my mind set now too! I used to be the opposite, till I realized I had been letting songs sit in the vault for 5+ years & never doing anything for fear of it not being the perfect song. I don't follow those rules now there's no such thing as the perfect song & it was no fun like it is now <3

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

I completely agree, my perfectionist side drains all the fun out of music, now I have to just get it out and get it done, and perform more with Controlled Passion/Emotion. That is great that you are the same now, it is the best thing to grow over time, and the best art form is the Live Performance, so I'm not too crazy over my own productions, unless I have a proper team to help my songs come out how I hear them in my head, I do the best I can, and keep it moving

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Hey my friend, I hope you are doing well and are blessed in good health.
Here's another rap challenge you should join in on with me and 5 others. Our goal is to reach 10 people who will sign up, and I know you have some heavy bars to share with us.
https://steemit.com/got16s/@voyceatlas/lets-get-more-contestants---got16s-lyrical-contest-1510104117-1956978

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steemitgraven29 (53) · 7 years ago

It's nice. Highly intelligent rhymes with a good rhythm. Good flow. Greenhouse gasses caused by cow flatulence!
I am a fan.
Invalid ninjas never die!

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

Indeed they don't ;)

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shezsheikh (51) · 7 years ago

Invalid Ninjas & hot 16’s NEVER DIE

That was 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

normalbro (55) · 7 years ago

haha great job!! reminds me of the GZA

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

The beat or my rhymes remind you of GZA? hahaha GZA is the man, I actually opened for him in New Zealand in 2011!

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normalbro (55) · 7 years ago

Wow thats amazing!! Your flow reminds me of him

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

Thank you kind sir!

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realurbanartist (56) · 7 years ago

booom fyah !!!!

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ackza (72) · 7 years ago

WTF you actually have real mercury poisoning??? How?? did you berk a CFL lightbulb??

hey check out my new steemit ads! from new hip hop video "Shooter"

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

Haha awesome. Yeah I broke a bulb but also from my amalgam fillings they're poison.. and probably from fish too! I messaged you on discord

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ackza (72) · 7 years ago

WTF why do u have mercury fillings in ur teeth?? yeah in Ecuador my friend had to go take those out... i never had fillings only had my dentist once put some sort of resin in there but yeah its incredible how they have dentists poisoning people. very sad and its true, when i was in Ecuador my friend had an Ecuadorian dentist take out all those terrible mercury fillings

i hate when i tell people that our American and Western vaccines are bad and they fucking act like im saying Vaccination itself is bad.......Totally ignoring the THIMEROSAL which is mercury... which is in vaccines ... The fucking molecule is PART mercury

Thiomersal
Pharmaceutical
Thiomersal, or thimerosal, is an organomercury compound. This compound is a well established antiseptic and antifungal agent. The pharmaceutical corporation Eli Lilly and Company gave thiomersal the trade name Merthiolate. Wikipedia
Formula: C9H9HgNaO2S
Molar mass: 404.81 g/mol
IUPAC ID: Ethyl(2-mercaptobenzoato-(2-)-O,S) mercurate(1-) sodium

See right there ..... Ethyl MERCAptobenzoato MERCURATE

LD50 (median dose): 75 mg/kg (oral, rat)
Soluble in: Water
EU classification (DSD) (outdated): Very toxic (T+); Dangerous for the environment (N); Repr. Cat. 1

VERY TOXIC DANGEROUS for the ENVIRONMENT yeah and humans...

so sad how blind people are ESPECIALLY the ones who have been THROUGH the university science system that is RUN by pharmaceutical and biotech companies that may have once been great companies but are now feeding on their own customers and its disgusting we could do so much more when we dont limit people

the reason someone would wanna poison a LOT of people ... to anyone who doesnt beleve that, is because of Eugenics.. its a Eugenics operation and its about depopulation....

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

Exactly. I never knew there was mercury in fillings til a few months ago & it instantly made sense with my random symptoms. They thought I had multiple sclerosis lol. Had a hair test and I'm full of mercury. The thing with mercury and heavy metals is some people have genes that make it near impossible for them to detox heavy metals, which is why vaccines with mercury in are a terrible idea. That's why we see some people are fine with a heavy load of heavy metals because they have a better detox system than others. The other people store heavy metals, which leads to disease & disorders, which leads to either death or a lot of money being made...