RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #5 SUBMISSION THREAD

obeg (43) · 7 years ago

Hope all is well, here is my off the top freestyle submission.

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3 votes

verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Nice freestyle bro, much respect
Fresh wisdom and inspiration refreshing entry

Steemit world let's go

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

ayyyy I loved those lyrics man. real shit

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speaktheunspoken (54) · 7 years ago

"Yeah I'm gifted, watching candles sticks, now I'm lifted" Nice bar man!!

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rondonson (66) · 7 years ago

this is fire @obeg!

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ariel1212king (49) · 7 years ago

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Crypto space all day, respect to the freestylers

"I'm legally blind, they call me Hellen Keller
I'm a stinging bee, I just came from the hive"

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mickeymic (46) · 7 years ago

thnx for the platform homes:

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3 votes

chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

ayyy love your lyrics and flow man

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mickeymic (46) · 7 years ago

thnx man

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

yessir, keep doing great things

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Nice bounce, rhythm and flow

My favorite part

"Everybody bluffing, what you catching feelings for?
Time to toughen up the muscle, go and give 'em war!
Toughen up the brain muscle and the heart muscle
It ain't easy though, I know it's a hard hustle"

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mickeymic (46) · 7 years ago

thank you

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

You are most welcome

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

I hope everything is ok dude. Thanks for putting this together. I did a written and freestyle on my blog but decided to post th written below.

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9 votes

verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Barred up @alao, love the deep message and the wisdom, chill flow

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thanks man. You came correct this week as well!!!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

You're welcome bro, we gotta support, motivate, inspire and educate one another.

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kaykunoichi (62) · 7 years ago

Def my kind of MC. One of my favs on here. Dope

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thank you for the comment. I noticed that you followed my friend @ flipsyde71. Thanks for the support!!!

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allcapsonezero (61) · 7 years ago

This is really nice!

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thank you for listening !!!

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speaktheunspoken (54) · 7 years ago

Nice bars yo!!

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thank you I'm gonna keep them comin!!!

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palisade (43) · 7 years ago

You've got a dope Jurassic 5 style vibe man, I dig it

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thanks man. This challenge has forced me to write again.

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago

Like a laid back flow, dope

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thanks man!!!

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https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@chiefmappster/a-judge-s-analysis-of-the-rap-challenge-week-5

chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

ayy I'm one of the judges buddy, if you wanna see areas of improvement check out my review of this week's entries. Helps you understand how we and I judge

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

I did!! Upvoted and resteemed.

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benja (60) · 7 years ago

Good vibes, came in strong man!

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

Thanks man. Just doin what I can!!!

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https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@eddiebxxxx/rapchallenge-week-5

eddiebxxxx (45) · 7 years ago (edited)

-Im from the land where no man can stand/
To give a helpin hand, grasshoppers actin like the bossman/
-Glass bottles in the saucepan, what a life/
-And you fuckin all the hoes, thats nice/
Get the fuck up outta here, fraudin as some buccaneers/
Bo Jackson leg brains, you aint raidin round here/
-I never played for ya team thats full of fear/
-Cus you more like some bucks witout the antlers/
-If you aint on my frequency then i can’t hear/
Im lookin in the mirror, why the fuck you think i came here/
-Yall aint G’s, you just g money/
-So go ahead and ask the local freemasons about me/
Fake and phony actornauts guardin the prison gates/
-Theyre not the slave masters, they’re the fuckin slaves/
-So why would i eat the green ham and eggs/
-I scream fuck the world, thats how a master baits/
-The notoriety of not havin shoes/
-I came out the pit to be a recluse/
Some would call my angels demons, some would call my change deceivin/
-Who gives a fuck, they just sleepin on a rainy weekend/

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5 votes

verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Deep lyrics and I peep the truth and wisdom, nice entry bro

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eddiebxxxx (45) · 7 years ago

Likewise bro, you bring it every week too.

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Appreciate that, Hip Hop is powerful, so I respect the craft indeed

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Glad you are back and hope all is good bro, thanks for the update.

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ariel1212king (49) · 7 years ago

Thanks bro ✊️

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

You're very welcome

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allcapsonezero (61) · 7 years ago

Thanks for hosting this! I hope all i well.

My cat Zelda makes a cameo.

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Nice chill flow entry man

"And the people in the place,well they go free
Every style and face, in the university"

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allcapsonezero (61) · 7 years ago

Thanks!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

You're most welcome

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https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@chrisgoans/rap-challenge-week-5-free-mind

chrisgoans (55) · 7 years ago

Hope all is well man...

Jonez...
Let the beat bump, thinking back to my adolescence
Pouring up another cup and drowning in my misconceptions of my time spent
Where have my days gone?
What am I chasing what am I getting away from?
I was blazed up raise up the shot glass high
Make a toast to the hopes of a better life
Little did I know that my plan was a big lie
Dropped out of school cuz tuition was so high
I'm just Trying to get it right dreams of a bank roll
Rubber band banks and a case full of queso
But I stay low, got a little bit of change though
Debt to the sky, piled high, oh my, just a trap that society sets to the blind eye, gotta get away, break the chains I'm a free mind
I was enslaved but it changed I'm a free mind
Chunk up a deuce say capeche with a peace sign

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3 votes

verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Nice chill entry bro

"Dropped out of school cuz tuition was so high
I'm just Trying to get it right dreams of a bank roll
Rubber band banks and a case full of queso
But I stay low, got a little bit of change though
Debt to the sky, piled high, oh my, just a trap that society sets to the blind eye, gotta get away, break the chains I'm a free mind
I was enslaved but it changed I'm a free mind"

Nice underlying messages here, started to dig beneath the surface

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chrisgoans (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks for checking it out man! I've been trying to dig a little deeper and at first I thought it was super hard being confined to only a minute long. But I think this is a great excercise in writing limiting the time because you are forced to think that much harder and attempt to make every line count in some way.

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Exactly I completely agree, I'm looking forward to next week's already, this is all good practice.

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inhale (53) · 7 years ago

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago (edited)

"How long you been in for?/info" Nice wordplay
"Treat people how you wanted be treated" That is always a nice phrase, but some people are sick and twisted and don't care about how they want to be treated. My best friend always says, "Treat people how they want to be treated, and not how you wanted to be treat because we are all different."
"Be the source of fun, compassion" - Definitely resonated with that line, nice

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inhale (53) · 7 years ago

How do you know how they want to be treated?

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

You'll only know if they tell you lol but I get what you're saying

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago (edited)

Thanks @rondonson for the rap contest. Good luck to everyone entering. Here is my submission.
Lyrics:

I don’t rap, I just spit encrypted messages
Access denied, simpletons can’t enter this
This is for the deep folks, interested to decode
Zoom beyond the pixels, still get the big picture effortless

My pen is the weapon, developing a delicatessen
Selling dead competitors the end of this session
Slash in a FLASH, splash ripples expand, so relatives
Pain’s still in DEVELOPMENT I end em in the DARK ROOM (whooo)

Can’t move, run in place like cartoons
Never harmed you, stab the canvas with some sharp tools
You happen to be on fool, second degree art wounds
Hate sequels, made part two just to kill ya soul too

That is crazy, apt to snap in a BAT of a lash DRACULA
Chewing veins, any blood group will do today
Back to the basics, anyone who trespass become a fresh batch of blood
You OK? Yes my iron deficiency is intact feel amazing

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

Holy shit. your voice man fuckin epic

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago

Thank you sir

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chiefmappster (63) · 7 years ago

you're welcome buddy, keep doing great things

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago (edited)

Nice voice character entry

"I don’t rap, I just spit encrypted messages
Access denied, simpletons can’t enter this
This is for the deep folks, interested to decode
Zoom beyond the pixels, still get the big picture effortless

My pen is the weapon, developing a delicatessen"

You were picking up nice momentum and rhythm

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago

Thanks, I appreciate it. Work hard on my craft

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Likewise, it shows, you're welcome indeed

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burningzeal (40) · 7 years ago

Thanks @rondonson for this rap challenge. Good luck to everyone! Here is my entry. https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@burningzeal/rap-challenge-5-entry-for-rondonson-contest-encrypted-messages-freeverse

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voyceatlas (56) · 7 years ago

Post the video so you don't get disqualified.

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https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@maxizee/maxi-zee-or-steemit-rap-challenge-5-or-original-entry-ratchet-brat-vibes

maxizee (55) · 7 years ago

Biggie vibe & Sensory Details.

I'm coming for ya'll.

Check my Actual post for Lyrics:

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voyceatlas (56) · 7 years ago (edited)

I peeped your 90s video... We need way more of that!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Good energy and character, keep flowing them lyrics

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ariel1212king (49) · 7 years ago

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decentralizd (62) · 7 years ago

Sending the $50 sbd shortly!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Appreciate you sponsoring this contest and Hip Hop movement, you and @pfunk really hold it down for the music community with your financial support for real! Many thanks and high gratitude

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zf1 (36) · 7 years ago

Lyrics
Listen to this keytar, going in real hard
Coming for the money Giovanni (pokemon)
Pocket full of Key Cards
Flow is retarded
I'm hot your retardant
Am i James harden or Deangelo Hall ( )
homies flipping D'Angelos, Down at the mall
Grinder on my mind sir, Spark up the headies
Marrio andretti, Paper chasing in my Chevy (chevy chase)
Used to be a gopher, over and over
Added crypto, to my Portfolio
flip off the boss, tell him to kick rocks
Its a Cattle call, no oxen in my replies (oxen = ox ox ox = X's and o's )
Hoes making lattice, up in their knee highs
I Only collude, with girls with a noodle
No i dont canoodle, with chicken heads full of the doodles
She gotta have thoughts, like Hieronymus Bosch
there is heat in my ledger (Heath Ledger)
gold to hodl man, no dent posting bale as a Oldman (Harvey dent, C. Bale, G. Oldman)

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