🎀 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #9 SUBMISSION THREAD - WHO WILL TAKE THE CROWN?? 🎧

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SUBMIT YOUR VIDEOS HERE!

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What is the Rap Challenge?

The SteemIT Rap Challenge is a weekly Hip-Hop competition for SBD. I launched this initiative to help grow the Hip-Hop community here on SteemIT. There are tons of rappers here and there wasn't a specific contest that gave these MC's a chance to compete against one another. Battling is one of the foundations of Hip-Hop culture so it is only right to have a Hip-Hop battle contest right here on our favorite social media platform.

Week 9

If you are part of the rap challenge this week submit your videos here and enter for a chance to win prizes! For those who have been with the rap challenge from the beginning, thank you for all your support. We have made Hip-Hop come alive on steemit, now let's keep on giving Hip-Hop some STEEM! Submit your videos!

Interested in joining?

Every week on Sunday I make a blog post with the beats for that week. So if you want to join the Rap Challenge just come to blog on Sunday and check the weekly rap challenge thread for the new beats.

Donators

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Shout outs

Shout out to @sirlunchthehost and the VOTU podcast.
Shout out to @mckenziegary
Shout out to my lil bro @theprophet0
Shout out to @jphenderson and the Whaleshares movement



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Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

She's back!!!!

Hiii @alao

There she is, this hot lics here doll. Love it.

Aw thanks!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

This was nice. You have a smooth jazzy flow, it really works well over this beat. Your style reminds me of the Natalie Stewart, the rapper from Floetry. You are great at painting pictures with your words, a lot of the phrases you used immediately created imagery in my minds eye. Looking forward to the next one.

Like these lines:
the cross fades, cause we never stay mad for long
with hot days, exotic as the amazon
got me wearing jungle skirts, rehearsing antiphons

Appreciate the feedback on my post also.

Woah this is the ultimate compliment. Thank you Fraze :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Love your flow, reminds me of E.V.E

thank you @yakuhi :)

Loving it!!

Thank you @senzainfinite loving yours too ^_^

Pure Dopeness!!

Thank you @opinizeunltd :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Those rhymes tho πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Ohlala, Flowing with the freshnesss, love it!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

The beat selection this week weren't exactly my comfort zone, but i got on it anyway. Enjoy

lyrics:
its a new age....\ new rats in an old cage\ new raps on a new page\ who knew we new slaves?\ we slave to get paid\ get paid to have it made,\ consume and get laid\ its sort of insane\ its all sorts of crazy, all sorts of nuts\ bulletproof Mercedes\ bulletproof the truck\ everybody is scared they're gonna loose their stuff\ everybody's aware the world can be rough\ they scared it's too much\ they scared it's not enough\ I'm prepared to get buck\ I ain't scared coz I'm tough\ this is real, it's no bluff\ Got skill a real as fuck\ this a rap challenge and I'm gunning for the cup\ checking my cheque balance, tryna cheque up my bucks\ checking my Mic status, let me bless up the drums\ boom to the bap, I' consumed in the rap\ I'm improving the track with the smoothness you lack\ I'm the coolest of cats, thats improving the raps\ I'm in tune with the facts\ I'm in tune with the track\ I'm in tune with the tune\ I'm in-tuned into you\ and "you" is the "tube" that got you tuned to this rap!

Great job man!!
Set it off strong with this one.

thanks man. i wonder if i scared the other contestants away this week, lol... there's not alot of entries

I'm coming...

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lol, nice to see more entries #BringIt

Ha ha. probably. i almost didnt but said fuk it!!
i aint no coward dats for sure!!!!
Ill come better next week

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

This is a rap challenge and I'm gunnin for the cup...ya buddy. Like that

lol thnx man... there's not alot of entries this week tho

Day not over yet. I'm sure more will arrive.

im surprised we dont have more by now myself....

Ended up with a decent turnout!

Shiiidd...sound like u was in ya comfort zone to me homie!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

Thank you... it sounds like it was my comfort zone coz i can jump on any beat... but it doesn't mean i like every beat, lol...

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Good stuff bro, bess flow! Keep it up!!

thanks man

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

BAM!!! This is hot

thank you

FπŸ”₯RE

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

thanks homey! i see you brought some fire too #dope

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

You're such an interesting dude, vids always in your own vibe, bars flow from one to another, smooth as butter, strong one!

thanks man. I appreciate that... especially coming from someone who consistently brings fire every week

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

This was cool man. Liked the edits you did on the video, makes this feel like a real rap video. Starting to feel like I need to step up my game on the production values.

This had a laidback sort of flow, like the style and the way you connected ideas together in the verse. Keep it going man.

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

thank you man. i'm glad u liked it. preciate the feedback

My entry.


not the best barely had time to get to it last minute.

Lyrics
This beat got me Steemin Gleamin
G class dreamin of a better life
Full stacks of that cheddar like
ah bread winner, Fat Pockets aint
never missed a dinner
Delivery of fire heat never free
Friends are Foes So Fuck em all
and let em Be
I refuse to lose this game we choose
to play, Break rules Mob made n Fade fools
evade crews Top down no shade blazed
when we cruise these beachfront views
no need to hurry keep it chill
B real in your heart
No stopin once you get the Fakin to start
I flip flows like hoes strip clothes
Send your brain into main overload
watch me grow from a seed planted
in the minds of every person on the planet
search n never find enough time 2 spend
livin life with my family n friends

when we cruise these beachfront views
no need to hurry keep it chill

Cruisn ya..

Thanks for the votes everyone!!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Cool verse man. Liked the content. I think you will be a beast once you get the flow a little smoother over the beat.

Like this:
watch me grow from a seed planted
in the minds of every person on the planet

Thanks man. Yeah. I get into it and pumped i get rushed sometimes. Have to burn 1 first next go... lol

awesome! i am in, I'll check on the beats for tomorrow! thanks for this fun and artsy contest! if you feel like a laugh, check out my vlog...https://steemit.com/life/@jacquelyne/steemit-vlog-entry-5-confessions-of-the-obsessed-stalker

I'm gonna have to bow out this week.. I'm down with a flu and I got hella work to deal with. Y'all kill aight! One! Resteeming of course :)

Take care of yourself and get well buddy. See ya soon.

Hope ya recover soon

get well & come back next week


pocket full of lettuce smoking on that seaweed/Im a vegetar(i)an nah i dont do beef/im more into bleu cheese keep knots like my shoestrings/ yall talk we do things tune into the new thing/pudding from me proving put in work while im cruising/strap my bodyguard let her sing Whitney Houston/"I will always love ya I will never judge ya/ but if u threaten mine u a shot mf'er/watching for the ops watching for the bots/cuz they gon turn into sentinels & do us worst than the cops/reaching for the pinnacle thats going to the top/and still take my losses like a man i never flop never dat/out them streets shit was getting hot mane/on to the next hustle it dont stop mane/godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game/whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

So laid-back, packed with knowledge, dope style broseph!

''whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain''

you ended your verse so smoothly with that one, damn, really digged that

Thanks for the love homie! im humbled

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

This is a real verse. Liked how you lace your perspective through the verse and keep it personal. Nice flow, and you had a couple cool punchlines in there too.

Liked this:
out them streets shit was getting hot mane
on to the next hustle it dont stop mane
godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game
whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain

Hit me back with some feed if you have time.

Thanks 4 the feedback bro!! keeping it personal the easiest way to go when writing, for me anyway lol...but yea i did make a point to make that verse gel together, glad u peeped it!!

You was picking my brain here man.
watching for the ops watching for the bots/cuz they gon turn into sentinels & do us worst than the cops
That's real, love the whole thing tho

Preciate it bro...yea the direction things moving in kinda scary

Pre-Matrix and Terminator visions...

precisely...

haha yeah that's a dope line

"out them streets shit was getting hot mane/on to the next hustle it dont stop mane/godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game/whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain" bro you said a mouth full with that line and it will go over a lot of people head. Keep doing what you do my G. @opinizeunltd

thanks for the love homie! glad u caught it...

i like your style man..

preciate it bro

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[Intro]
Nocturnal rainbow, painting pictures when sun goes
every other night, got me feeling like Im van goh
Talking to my conscience, running out of options
No more better friends, Im just 6 deep in these grudges

[Verse]
Oh Lord
And I just care about the things that they on
But I feel lost every time I hop on things that they on
Im convinced that I'm in conflict with my thoughts
So I'm just conscious of this shit that I've been taught
all by my father and my mother
I murder any beat that I might jump on, ask my brother
I dont bother even when the bible says not to murder
I muster all the courage to study, I'm on my masters
I mastered the art of servitude, fuck that shit that's my attitude
Huh
Fuck the world, you done slip through her butt crack (and you can)
She 'ont give you shit but you just gotta come back
Splurge your dollars on where it counts, till the last round
Keep knocking on the walls and it gon come down

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Being honest, this was my favorite post this week (so far at least). Like the style, you have flow and lyrics and a personal vibe. There are some great lines in here, definitely feels inspired by poetry.

Liked this part:
Nocturnal rainbow, painting pictures when sun goes
every other night, got me feeling like Im van goh

Keep the drops coming man.

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Respect bro! I appreciate your kind words, thanks for the motivation

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Good stuff.
I muster all the courage to study, I'm on my masters
I mastered the art of servitude, fuck that shit that's my attitude

Hard line

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Hahahha. Thanks mahn! Trying hard to spit like yallπŸ’ͺ Props

Love your voice!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Ooh mahn, the great @kaykunoichi πŸ™Œ Thanks a lot

;)

Talking to my conscience, running out of options
No more better friends, Im just 6 deep in these grudges

Ouch man, good lic

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Lool! ...appreciate mahnπŸ’ͺ

Awesome job man!!!
I mastered the art of servitude, fuck that shit that's my attitude!!!! Killed it

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

πŸ˜€ Thanks mahn!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Like @kaykunoichi already said, your voice sounds too dope, clever bars aswell. YeuhYeuh!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Maaahn, πŸ™Œ I appreciate your good words

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LYRICS

I am bringing this fire, and if it's fire it's lava and if it's lava then it's nuclear flame
Aint' looking for no superman cause no I am no Lois Lane
They be like hold up baby you should stay up in your lane
I ain't in no lane, Im floating over competition
Ain't no hoping and no wishing, Im just praying thru Yahawah
Cause ain't no man know no minute, no day or even hour
I come through with true strength, not that fictitious show power
Alright so ring it out
A talk to B, and they lookin at me
as I collect them scrolls and navigating them seas
Right down to Z, they follow leads cause they finally see
so they do opposite things
cause, if you just don't know where you're going
Anywhere will get you there, and to me that's some plenty fair
If you aint putting in the work then you left with that penny fare.
So here we, yeah here we go
Im navigating theses seas, they stuck up up on the shore, are you sure?
A negative time a negative positive so I know
A negative times a negative and the visuals they show
A talk to B and they lookin a me as Im collecting scrolls and navigating these seas
Are you sure? A negative times a negative positive so I know
A negative times a negative and the visuals they show

Fresh :)

Thanks so much!!

I am bringing this fire, and if it's fire it's lava and if it's lava then it's nuclear flame
That's hot lol good flow hey, smooth

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

''I come through with true strength, not that fictitious show power''

No. Doubt. Love the smooth flows!

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Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Life is what you make it, so i’m on my green like aphids,
Ain’t waiting, for a tree, with leaves of big faces,
You can keep the Grants ... I'm all about the Benjamins,
If time is money then you gotta watch the way you spending it,
Mine is earning interest, isn’t that interesting,
I invest it like i got my future self to mentor me,
Told myself, my destiny would be pain and misery,
If i didn’t see the need to think about the bigger scene,
The world’s a stage... they acting fake i know they lame,
...Hating cause i’m doing what they know they can’t,
I’m not ashamed, not a player but i know the game,
If you can’t feel me you must be on novocaine,
Numb to it, dumb clueless, like blondie in that one movie,
Need brains, like zombies, scarecrows and yours truly,
Young, wild, unruly, guess i never grew up fully,
But I’ve been putting in work, like the lever, screw, and pulley
Dropping science that’s classical…
Just took y’all to school, got tenure now I’m leaving on sabbatical

Dopeness

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ (edited)

I invest it like i got my future self to mentor me,
love that man

Nice flow n lyrics. Another one beastin

you remind me of 3 stacks. dope!

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Let's see how this week turns out. I'm on vacation at the moment so I won't be competing.

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Nice. And don't forget to check my DJ LIVE SET @changfly

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Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

nice

Very interesting . Upvoted and resteemed :-)

Here comes the champ.

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Came for a dollar now im rich, came for a dollar now the whole gang rich.. Wrote two pages bought a boat, wrote two more made a moat to make it float, just by posting stuff like a picture of a goat. 🐐

My articles be lit, the trending page's new hit, rolling blunts with cash rather than paper, wrote about that made money like water to vapor.

Wrote two rimes for two crimes now this hit be lit making money like a bunny running wield on da block.

Hahahha not really into rap though wanted to write something stupid xD

All the best to all.

please dont spam

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Sorry

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

I already upvote, follow and reestem your post.
please do the same with me... (follow me, upvote me and reestem me please)

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