RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #8 SUBMISSION THREAD - GET YOUR REAL ANALYSIS ON SUNDAY 🎧

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🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #8 SUBMISSION THREAD - GET YOUR REAL ANALYSIS ON SUNDAY 🎧

in rapchallenge •  7 years ago 


Lyrics:
I love you like a tree by the freeway
You got that
Gross Point Blank stare
Minnie Driver Leeway

Alan Watts
Electric current
Flowing like the water wasn't

Crypto current
I'm not balling
I just fall off subject

Matter at hands
I'm the Outkast of
Your Vampiric scams

My Merkaba has risen above
Abandonment issues
And redundant patterns

Like every time you watch a movie
You gotta smoke weed and snack
Like every time you travel
You gotta turn up and dance

Nothing wrong with that
I'm deconditoned like long locs
With glands
That support my brain tissues
That revolve my stance
On current issues
Like is the rain created by
Weather modifiers?
Are both your brain hemispheres
Cooperating together?
Have you been divided
By race, religion, political affiliation?
Your Sex, your age
You education, your indoctrination?

Have you been given the secrets of the universe?
By your dream state or have you given credence,
That every time your mind is quiet
Is when you hear your breathing,

You gonna just sit there and devise new
Strategies to make an escape,
Or stand up and do the knowledge
For the coming days,
Accept the pain you feel
Surrender to the force you feeding,
That's the elevator to the next floor of being,

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I think you just made the cut off. I was trying to make sure I got to all of the entries.

ok that's dope, wasn't sure if I made it in time

some deep shit right here. nice entry bro

thank you for the input, glad you vibin with it

''On current issues
Like is the rain created by
Weather modifiers?
Are both your brain hemispheres
Cooperating together?
Have you been divided
By race, religion, political affiliation?
Your Sex, your age
You education, your indoctrination?''

Thise freeverse was reaallly tight, this is my favorite part, personally. So many lines had this clever delivery or meaning, bars you can feed on, soul food if you will. Dope entry man!

haha right on, the soul food is a good way to put it for sure.