Steemit Slam Poem - Leaving

in slam •  8 years ago  (edited)


Leaving
By thehattedtomfool

Farewell my friends,
farewell to all!
Goodbye to you and ye.
Farewell to all the flowers, birds,
farewell, the sky and sea.

The time has come,
I'll miss you all!
I hope you'll do the same.
I'll not forget a moment
as my smoke will lose its flame.

Farewell my dear,
I'll miss you most.
Though I've held on so long..
And while you think I'm leaving, well
already, I'll be gone.

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Good writing! But first of all, your link in your comment doesn't work... and also, it helps greatly if you upvote the post you shared yourself! After all, you said that you enjoyed reading it, right? :)

Thanks! Link doesn't work though? That's strange it seems fine for my end. Do you know If there is possibly a better way to set it up so that it's working for everyone? (Somewhat new at this platform sorry) and cool, thanks for pointing that out! Upvoted them :)