Hola amigos de Steemit, me gustaría dejarles este poema erótico que hice hace unos días, espero que sea de su agrado.
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A la luz del sol
No sé qué contemplaría por más tiempo,
si un cuadro Miguel Ángel
o tus nalgas a la luz del sol.
Pensé que solo encontraría arte
en las pinturas antiguas,
en las esculturas
o en la dulzura de la luna,
hasta que vi tu cuerpo
moviéndose en las aguas,
como sirena dispuesta a cautivar
con el mudo canto de su carne.
Tus glúteos surcaban las aguas como un barco,
yo como marinero errante
quise perderme entre tus olas,
menearme en ellas como remos impulsados por el deseo.
A lo lejos te contemplo, ¡oh sirena!
Dichoso el hombre que se haga preso
del manto de tu carne mullida
y nade contigo en las cálidas aguas de tu ser.
Este post es de mi autoría
muy buen poema te felicito excelente sigue así y escucha la canción de Nalgas del grupo Buena Fe, saludos Votado y siguiendote
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Escuché la canción y me gustó tanto el ritmo como la letra, gracias por recomendarla.
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Está bueno, falta un poco de rima, y mirar lo de los espacios entre las líneas pero está bueno amigo
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Hola, el poema no lo quise hacer con rima, es así en verso libre. Lo del espacio está bien, después lo voy arreglar. Gracias por comentar. Un abrazo.
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Jejejeje excelente amigo.
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Gracias por pasarte a leer.
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Voto y resteem ♥ JAJA eres tú
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Gracias amigo
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@originalworks @originalworks2
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The @OriginalWorks bot has determined this post by @chris97 to be original material and upvoted it!
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m encanto este poema!
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Gracias viejo, ahora que estoy libre puedo pasarme a leer algo de lo tuyo :D
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el arte es ta en todos lados bro!!! pero en la carne femenina llega de manera mas contundente... me gusto te sigo, sigueme tu si quieres
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Un buen hombre que sepa reconocer la carne de la mujer como una arte se merece ser seguido con mucho gusto.
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Excelente poema! saludos!
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Gracias Danvel, te he visto a menudo aqui en steem y en los grupos de discord. Voy a prestar atención a tus post. Un abrazo.
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Interesante poema amigo mío, te sigo...
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Gracias amigo, también te sigo. Me daré una vuelta por tus post.
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Posting links only is SPAM
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