SUCIA
Camino por el mundo
con miedo y sin rumbo
le temo al dolor
le temo a la vida
le temo a lo profundo
de mi propio ser
a la incertidumbre
al oscurecer
a que tú me veas
cuando el sol me alumbra
a que al fin descubras
aquella penumbra
que a mí me atormenta
que me hace violenta
esa podredumbre
que en mí se acrecienta
no quiero que huelas
no quiero que veas
esa suciedad
que invade mis manos
que impregna mis pies
que nos hace humanos
quédate bien lejos
ya déjame sola
con mi oscuridad
con todos mis miedos
y con mis gusanos.
Fotografía de Joel Overbeck en Unsplash
© 2018, Elena Lobos
Demasiados versos oscuros, hasta el final, pero quedo espectacular con eso de todos mis miedos y mis gusanos. Un toque genial!!!
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Ea! Gracias, mi amor <3<3
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Me encanta! Logras reflejar de una gran forma tus sentimientos
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Gracias, @justeli! Me alegra que te haya gustado ^_^
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woah me encanto tu poema!! un gran cierre la verdad.
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Gracias, Jean! Abrazos <3
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Cada vez más sólida, contundente y precisa en las letras, @elelobos.
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Gracias, mi Landis ^_^
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Una elección severa ante la imagen que describes. Saludos.
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Bastante XD Gracias por la visita, Darius! ^^
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¡Tus poesías son realmente increíbles! Un abrazo, te sigo leyendo:)
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Gracias, Andreis! :) Besos!
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Se te da muy natural esto de escribir poemas y con un gran repertorio.
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Eso intento, eso intento. Gracias! :D
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Todos tenemos un poquito de oscuridad dentro de nosotros, y es esa misma oscuridad la que proyectamos hacia el exterior y a la que tanto tememos, pero esto es solo un reflejo de nuestro miedo a la oscuridad que habita en nuestro interior. Qué bonito poema, Elena, tienes mucho talento. Saludos, te estoy siguiendo<3
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Me encanta tu comentario ^_^ Tienes toda la razón. Me alegra mucho que te haya gustado <3 También te sigo. Besos y abrazos, Eleana.
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Excelente amiga! Me gusta mucho tu contenido.
Espero y puedas ver el mio, soy fotografo. Y soy Venezolano. Saludos!!!
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Pronto me doy una vuelta por allá! Abrazos!
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@elelobos upvoted this post via @poetsunit
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Me impresiona la capacidad que tienes para crear poemas tan buenos con temas poco usuales. Felicidades @elelobos
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Gracias, @sanchezal95 :) Tu comentario me motiva un montón <3
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Fascinante poema, me encantó , oscuramente poética tu prosa en este viaje a la oscuridad del ser, me atraparon varios versos, pero estos:
son Luz que disipa las tinieblas, Saludos y un abrazo fuerte ... ;)Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
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Tus comentarios hacen que quiera taparme la cara por el sonrojo jajajajaj Muchos besos y abrazos para ti, mi @jakim7 <3
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Pude respirar la soledad y la oscuridad a través de las letras de tus relatos. Me gustó leer este hermoso poema, un saludo!
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Tan lindo ^_^ Gracias! <3
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<3 <3 <3 <3
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Me gustó. Tengo algo que mostrate.
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Qué será... O.O
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como nos tienes acostumbrados, poemas muy bien logrados... te animas a hacer poesía de verso libre???
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mmmm quizás... No son mis favoritos pero puedo intentarlo.
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Siempre he admirado a las personas que escriben poesía, cuando los leo todos sus sentimientos logran ser transmitidos de una forma hermosa. No fuiste la excepción, que bello poema. Felicidades :D
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Ay, gracias por tus palabras, Adrianaysm! Abrazos <3
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Hola buen poema me encanto ....saludos y excito amiga.
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Gracias, amiga :D Besos!
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Ah que bueno me gustó! Me parece que me voy a pasar a leer otros!!! :D
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Ea! No todos son tan oscuros pero la mayoría sí XD
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aaaah nonono si no son oscuros entonces no quiero leerlos jajaj :P
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Genial, ele, buen poema. Saludos.
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Gracias, Psi <3
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