En la oscuridad y el silencio de la noche,
por una desolada calle le ven pasar,
va caminando, sin prisa y sin pausa,
llevando a cuesta su triste penar.
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La tristeza de sus ojos conmueve, La luna llena ilumina el sendero, |
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Le dicen loca, perdió su juicio, Hoy vaga sola por esas calles, |
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El no llegó ese día a su encuentro,
no hubo repuestas a su dolor,
en la vergüenza del abandono,
en el dolor de aquel desamor,
en la tristeza de lo perdido,
por todo aquello, loca quedó.
Holaa! Quiero felicitarte por la poesia porque estuvo realmente linda considero que al editar las imagenes le restaste calidad; ya que en pixabay se ven super nitidas y perfectas pero al verlas por aqui se ven pixeladas.
hay editores que mantienen la nitidez aunque la cortes o reduzcas. Es preferible cortar los post a reducirles el tamaño ya que la resolucion cambia.
Espero ver cosas nuevas
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Agradezco mucho tus comentarios y sugerencias. Lo aprecio realmente, lo consideraré para futuras publicaciones. Gracias.
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Me ha gustado mucho, ¡Bien hecho! ;)
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Que bueno saberlo. Gracias.
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Me encantóooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Gracias, muchas gracias. Qué gusto me da saberlo.
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Toda una belleza de publicación y escrito, mis respetos totales
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Honor que me haces, de verdad, muchas gracias por el apoyo.
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Hola,hola. El trail de @generausd fue creado para apoyar todas aquellas contribuciones subvaloradas que tienen un excelente contenido como la tuya.Saludos ,sigue creando buen contenido... Si quieres ser parte de nuestra comunidad te invito a que le des click a estos enlaces: Disscord Registro TRAIL
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Muy agradecida por el apoyo recibido. ;)
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Me enamoreeee, te felicito, sencillamente hermoso.
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Gracias, lo aprecio mucho.
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Hermoso @gorayii De verdad, me gusta mucho tu trabajo.
El maquetado, me encantó.
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Muchas gracias mi estimado. Qué gustazo!
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¡Buen post! Hermoso :) saludos
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Muchas gracias ;)
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Me encantó el escrito.. y la estética de tu post esta espectacular.
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Es muy grato saberlo. Gracias.
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Wow me encanto mucho tu post, tanto la estética como el escrito, te quedo increíble, sigue así y llegaras alto 👏🏻
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Agradezco mucho tus bellas palabras. Gracias.
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Me gusto bastante. Sigue así.
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Muchas gracias bella...
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Wow!.. sentí mucha pena. Excelente post, te felicito.
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Te lo agradezco mucho ;)
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Esa historia me recuerda a la de una que vivió en un muelle jejeje... Me ha encantado, siempre he dicho que escribir poesía es un don y sin duda tu lo posees. Felicitaciones!!!
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Muchísimas gracias, a todos le ha recordado la loca del muelle de San Blas jajaja
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¡Precioso!
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Muchas gracias!
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Buena publicación, buenas letras, buenas imágenes y buen mensaje... Siempre buen contenido ... Un beso ...
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Qué amable @eleazarvo Muchas gracias por el apoyo
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Muy bueno, me gusta como llevaste a cabo el post y en general se ve muy estético. ¡Saludos!
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Muchas gracias, muy amable.
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Me encantó, gracias por compartirlo.
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Gracias a ti por la visita.
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Espectacular. Te felicito.
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Gracias mi bella ;)
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Me gustó mucho esta pequeña poesía. Éxito.
Yo le añadiría un final inesperado sobre el por qué el novio jamás llegó... "tal vez no fue por falta de amor, sino que la vida no lo dejó continuar, desaparecido está..."
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Gracias por tu aporte. Ese también es un buen final. ;)
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Maravilloso! Espectacular...
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Muchas gracias, lo aprecio.
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Lindo como siempre mi corazón.
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Gracias mi estimado, es un gusto saberlo.
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Excelente de verdad me encanta como has crecido en la plataforma, el maquetado esta genial, el escrito me recordó un poco la canción de mana, muelle de sambla, fuerte abrazo.
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Muchísimas gracias, la ayuda que recibo de todos ustedes me lleva de la mano.... A todos le recuerda la loca del muelle de San Blas jajaj
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Excelente me encantan tus separadores y cómo encerraste los párrafos.
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Muchas gracias mujer ;)
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Excelente post, saludos.
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Muchas gracias ;)
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que historia mas triste, quisiera darle otro dinal pero es tu historia cruel, jejejje. saludos desde una milla más.
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Gracias Carolina, me da risa lo de la historia cruel jajaja. Saludos!
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Muy buen poema.
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Gracias Andrea, muy amable.
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¡Cuánta melancolía! me recuerda al palabreo de la Loca Luz Caraballo. Excelente tu material.
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Gracias mi estimado Roco, tus palabras siempre alentadoras.
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Buenisimo, ganaste un nuevo seguidor! Saludos
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Honor que me haces, bienvenido. Saludos!
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por alguna razon lo asocie con la cancion que se llama "la loca del muelle de sanblas" de mana
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Muchos lo hicieron ;) Gracias por la visita.
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Muy buen post! Gracias por compartir con nosotros en nuestra octava curación en vivo.
Tu entrada ha sido votada por el trail @Faircrew. Para más información, os invito a formar parte de nuestro servidor de Discord.
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Gracias @faircrew por la oportunidad y el apoyo.
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Por la excelente presentación y calidad de su contenido
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Muchas gracias mi estimado, lo aprecio.
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La desilusión realmente puede trastornar a un ser humano, por el rechazo rotundo hacia su persona. Te suprime la autoestima, te haces nada.
Realmente muy triste tu post, pero a la vez muy hermoso.
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Agradezco mucho tu apreciación, es así tal cual. Gracias por leerlo.
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Me gustó mucho!Bien trabajado :).
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Muchas gracias
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Me pareció maravilloso excelente
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Muy agradecida ;)
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Guao demasiado hermoso, me recordo al muelle de San Blás.
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Si, a muchos le pasó igual jajaja Gracias!
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Palabras en verso que retrata un alma atormentada..! ¡Votado por Engranaje!
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Muy agradecida por su gran apoyo siempre.
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¡Ovación de pie..!
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Honor que me hace. Muchas gracias!
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Gran poema!, es sencillamente una obra de arte :D
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Wow! Muchas gracias, lo aprecio mucho.
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Muy bonito y la estética del post me encantó.
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Muchas gracias, que bueno saberlo.
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wow, @gorayii que hermoso poema, me gustó mucho. Además de que el maquetado está excelente.
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Muchas gracias @mariart1 aprecio mucho tu comentario, es motivador.
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Hermoso, me encantó.
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Siempre agradecida por su apoyo.
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Esta muy lindo el escrito algo poetico y con toque de fatalidad a la que acostumbraban los amantes del arte griego
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Gracias por apreciarlo, me alegra tenerte por aquí.
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Hermoso post, cálida presentación, y muy sentido escrito. Felicitaciones.
Buena vibra.
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Es un gusto saber que ha gustado. Gracias.
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Es un gusto saber que ha gustado. Gracias.
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Felicitaciones por este bello trabajo.
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Muchas gracias. Agradezco tu apoyo.
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