Ya no estás (Poema original)

in spanish •  8 years ago  (edited)


De mirar

Sobre las siete heridas

Con la sombra de tu calor

La sombra del viento a favor

La sombra del mar contenido

Entre tu piel de arena


Si en mis sueños

Te puedo llegar a encontrar

La vida es un sueño feliz

La historia se ha hecho real

La historia de versos cansados

Es solo un recuerdo


Bajo la lluvia, todavía el sol

Nos solía contar algunas cosas

La esperanza, que trajo mi viejo huracán

Y el sonido abrumador de una guitarra

La soledad, no resiste el peso de la verdad

Ya no estás...



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      ·  8 years ago 

    " Y el sonido abrumador de una guitarra"....cuando la música abre viejas heridas.....
    Pero si no fuera por esas heridas, quizá no escribiríamos poemas.
    Será el otoño.
    Saludos!

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        ·  8 years ago 

      Será! :)

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          ·  8 years ago 

        Esa @nelyp ahí! Sí señora! Muy bonito :)

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              ·  8 years ago 

            Wow thanks (again) @virtualgrowth! 💖

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                  ·  8 years ago 

                Precioso @nelyp, yo tengo un "ya no estás" muy reciente y MUY importante, me has emocionado

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                    ·  8 years ago 

                  Aaawwww 💖

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