** 100 Days of Poetry Challenge
-----Update [Day 8]----- **
**BEST FRIENDS **
You
He and they
Is the breath
My life
You
Not beautiful
My feet
When there are no
I saw your smile
Her smile
And their smile
You
This world
Will be deserted
When you're
No humming
About best friend
You
Let's
Towards the world
Full friend
And
We explore the
Ocean life
Full
Puzzle
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Note :
A sprig of rose can be my garden and a friend could be my world
True friends are the ones who most recently comes when we are in the fun but always come first when we're trouble
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(Thank you for mebaca. Apologize for not writing all clear because I am still a NOVICE)
**Original Poetry of**
Thank you for reading (suggestion)
@wiralhokseumwe by :
**SAHABAT SEJATI**
Kamu
Dia dan mereka
Adalah nafas
Kehidupanku
Kamu
Tidak indah
Langkahku
Bila tiada
Kulihat senyummu
Senyumnya
Dan senyum mereka
Kamu
Langkahlah
Dunia ini
Ketika kau
Melihat seorang
Sahabat
Kamu
Dunia ini
Akan sepi
Bila kau
Tak bersenandung
Tentang sahabat
Kamu
Mari kita
Menuju dunia
Penuh sahabat
Dan
Kita arungi
Samudera hidup
Yang penuh
Teka teki
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Catatan :
Setangkai bunga mawar bisa menjadi tamanku dan seorang sahabat bisa menjadi duniaku
Sahabat sejati adalah orang yang paling terakhir datang saat kita dalam kegembiraan tetapi selalu pertama datang saat kita sedang kesusahan
@wiralhokseumawe say many thanks to @d-pend and SteemitSchool. Hopefully this poem can give a lot of benefits for us all
**Original Poetry of**
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@wiralhokseumwe by :
Please could you include the poetry challenge day in the title of your poem, so it qualifies each day i.e. "BEST FRIENDS (100 days of poetry challange Day 8)"
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Thank you for visiting @hopehuggs
above the title, I have included a number of days and I will add the name of the day.
Does that mean to you?
Sorry my English is less good but I've been trying
@hopehuggs thanks you sou much
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IF you could just add the day in the title as well, as below each day, that would be fine...
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Well.. I understand @hopehuggs I would add today on my title.
Friendship greetings @hopehuggs
I will directly add them now, thanks for the advice
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Thanks for visiting and commenting on my blog, i did the same. :)
All the best for the challenge :)
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U welcome @himshweta
You're a Princess., I love you
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