RE: The Story of our Earth and Moon...

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The Story of our Earth and Moon...

in steemstem •  6 years ago 

Hi @pratik27. It was kinda difficult to grasp the concept maybe due to the fact that I'm not familiar with such subject. I've realised that towards the end of your article, there were no pictures, just a thousand words. I would suggest you add a picture for every 2 major paragraphs to make it more readable. I'm not sure about everyone else, but I prefer an article which has lots of related picture in it (but not too much).

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  ·  6 years ago (edited)

Thanks for your genuine feedback @chloroform. I will make sure I search enough images when I plan my articles. The articles obviously are for the readers to understand as easily as possible. I added a few images that I thought could help in better understanding and/or imagination.

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

I read this comment earlier, and I replied, but I missed the most important point you made... It was kinda difficult to grasp...

Well, you may not know, but this actually turns the article into a piece of trash. And I am going to edit it, entirely.

It's just that this took me so long to understand. Also, thanks a lot for your genuine feedbacks @chloroform and @katerinaramm. They will always be appreciated.