Thanks for this post.

If I may give you an advice (do not hesitate to contact SteemSTEM honour members for more information), you should try to diversify the sources used to write up your article. For instance, you could try to get and read the actually scientific studies that you mentioned and that are backing up the claims made in the article.

This would allow you to do more (i.e. go beyond) the summary of an article taken from another blog without doing more research.

Thanks in advance for your consideration!